Penname: RockyB [Contact] Real name: Raquel Brooks
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Summary: A part of her hated him... and another part of her wanted a second chance. One shot. Takes place in the future. UxY
Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 980 Read Count: 1982
Published: Dec 22, 2005 Updated: Dec 22, 2005
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting......very interesting....Pretty good! I liked it! I can understand Yumi's feelings completly, I've certainly dealt with something similar to that before!

Summary: Pop Quiz: When you are mysteriously thrown into the CL universe, what do you do?
Categories: Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed: Yes Word count: 12166 Read Count: 253413
Published: Dec 23, 2005 Updated: Aug 20, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Just a normal day

Pretty interesting so far, I'm not completly sure were your going with this!

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Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Chapter Without A Name

Wow! pretty freaky twist in the end, that the whole thing wasn't a dream! Very good story!

Summary: FeatureEmily centered oneshot."Hello, Yumi," she said, voice shaking slightly. "It's been a while hasn't it? Four years, in fact. You probably wouldn't even remember me now."

Categories: Ships Characters: Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 947 Read Count: 2163
Published: Dec 23, 2005 Updated: Dec 23, 2005
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so ..deep! It really said something and the whole thing was almost canon, it makes sense that Ulrich would replace Yumi with Emily if something were to happen to her!I mean he did connect with her and sort- of go out with her..to a point, when he felt insecure about Yumi. Why would it be any different if Yumi were to die, i haven't seen any other girl connect with Ulrich except mabe..Sissi!Emily was pretty in character too, and it is totally believable that Ulrich would still obsess over Yumi even if she were to die while they would be going out, if they ever go out. Despite what i've said earlier there is a big part of me that believes that Yumi/Ulrich just don't work. They're both too stubborn to admit there feelings, both defensive emotionally, both very serious and intense..I mean how will anything ever get anywhere, it's been two seasons..two GOD-DAMN SEASONS and they still haven't gotten anywhere, too busy being jealous over each others'.. much smaller intersts. It's flippin' ridiculous! But anyway, i still thought the story was great!

Summary: Ulrich's aware of some feelings that don't necessarily belong.... I WARN YOU: Implied boy's love and self-injury. Do not read if you cannot handle.
Categories: Ships, Ships > Other Characters: Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 659 Read Count: 1127
Published: Aug 31, 2006 Updated: Aug 31, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Routine

Woah! Ulrich likes Yumi yet lusts over Odd and then punishes himself by cutting himself? Can't say i've heard that before. Really good! It might do you some good to make a chapter-fic sequel of this one-shot! The idea is stuck in my head now! Great set-up! i love how you set it up in third-person, but didn't mention any names, but you still know exactly who is who! Perfect, absolutly perfect! Best story i've read so far on this site you shouldn't give up on this set-up, do a few more things with it! Oh and in response to your author note(shown above the story,of course), you should be proud of this story, I'd be fucking-damn proud myself, if i wrote this!!! Once again, it was freaking perfect!I give it on a scale of 1to 10 a...24 even if the rating i give is a 10! It 's only because that's the highest number you can give for a story, but i'm sticking with my..24!

Summary: William is sick of waiting for Ulrich. XANA attacks. Yumi's life is thrown into chaos when everything changes and something unexpected happens.
Categories: Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Sissi Delmas, Ulrich Stern, William Dunbar, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Suspense
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Novel Idea
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed: Yes Word count: 1842 Read Count: 50841
Published: Sep 01, 2006 Updated: Sep 25, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: First Day Back

Extremely good, and very in-character! The story is very realistic as well! I can almost believe I'm watching an episode of Code Lyoko! Now i think I get why you named this story " Blind Sided". It makes sense,completly easy to follow. I love it! This is going straight to my " Favorite Stories" list . Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! 

Author's Response: Thank you. That was my intent. I'm so glad you think so! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: XANA's New Attack

YUMI'S BLIND AND HAS BEEN CAPTURED BY XANA??!! OMG!!!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: The Search

I bet you, Ulrich is going to save her or she'll really drown. Actually, I'm really not completly sure what's going to happen! I loved this one!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Race to Aelita

WHOOPEE!!!! Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: Trust

Suspense!!!!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: Not the Same

this story was GREAT!!!! I can't believe it's over!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! But as they say, everything must come to an end. Thanks so much for all of your reviews! They are much appreciated.

Summary: William's dead, the school is abuzz.  A dark look at the motives of a maligned character.
Categories: Seasons > Season 3, Ships > Other Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Sissi Delmas, Ulrich Stern, William Dunbar, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst, Mystery
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No Word count: 1852 Read Count: 3932
Published: Sep 01, 2006 Updated: Sep 01, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really good, i've read tons of stuff about Sissi joining the group, but this is very unique from all the others I've read!Rock on!



Author's Response: But she's not going to join the group...sorry if I gave you the wrong impression.  Ulrich just needs to ask some questions of Sissi in the last chapter, tie up some loose ends.  That's all.

Summary: Everyone has their battles, their demons to fight. Some are just harder to tame than others. JY friendship, and slight romance, if you want to call it that.
Categories: Ships > Jeremie and Yumi Characters: Jeremie Belpois, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 2157 Read Count: 1406
Published: Sep 01, 2006 Updated: Sep 01, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was....... so unique. I've never read aYumi/Jeremy fic, it's crossed my mind before, but i never thought there would be such a good story about this non-canon couple! It was a really good one-shot. There should have been an episode just like that.Way to think outside the box!

Summary: Ulrich and Yumi are deeply in love and they can both release their feelings to one another, but Yumi has a few thing she has to tell Ulrich sooner or later. If you want to know more about the other couples, email me.  THIS CONTAINS SEX SCENES IN LATER CHAPTERS, IF YOU ARE UNDER THE AGE OF 18, IT'S YOUR RESPONSIBILITY FOR READING, IT'S NOT MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Categories: Ships Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed: No Word count: 1252 Read Count: 20497
Published: Sep 01, 2006 Updated: Sep 01, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Heh heh.... that was an okay chapter, i think the best part was Yumi's dream...she saw her own father, that is too much. Keep up the good work! Not the best story I've read but..good enough!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

 The story so far is pretty good! Maybe just a little too lovey dovey! It's not completly realistic either! The characters need to be a bit more "in-character", but you've got Jeremie and Aelita down well! I give it a 7.5!

Summary: The line between darkness and light is but a thin line. And a member of the lyoko gang is going to learn just how thin that line really is.
Categories: Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 563 Read Count: 2802
Published: Sep 02, 2006 Updated: Sep 02, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A rope in one hand, a string in the other

Don't know what to make of it , not much has happened! Though, it seems to be going in the right direction!

Summary: One of Odd's random whims leads his friends into a journey they probably won't ever forget.
Categories: Seasons, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No Word count: 5635 Read Count: 15362
Published: Sep 02, 2006 Updated: Sep 04, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Whim

Very good!Extremely different from you other story "Routine", but still great! I'm in suspense! I wonder what Yumi's song is gonna be about!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: The Result

Way cool!!! Really,really good story! Very entertaining to say the least! I'm in complete suspense! I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Summary: A young woman struggles to remember what fills the void in her memory.
Categories: Seasons, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 2405 Read Count: 1516
Published: Sep 03, 2006 Updated: Sep 03, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.... Really good story! Looks like a lab accident wiped Aelita's memory, or something!! The man at the bar was Ulrich. She saw Odd having a concert with his band! Jeremy's dead! This is something else. Please continue!

Summary: Ulrich is always stoic, always calm and collected. Will a day of rotten luck change that?
Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 2523 Read Count: 1509
Published: Sep 05, 2006 Updated: Sep 05, 2006
Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...You really had me going there! I thought it really was a X.A.N.A attack! good story!