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Bio:
Strang, 14, from Kansas. I think things through, most of the time.
Categories: Seasons > Season 1, Seasons > Season 2 Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 698 Read Count: 1469
Date: Feb 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Import :: SP1
not bad. Interesting Idea. sorry i can't be much more help. But it's nice.
Jeremie return to Kadic Twelve years after the computer was shut down. But a lot has happened in that time.
Now draw me a picture of the new virtual gardians and send it to me at kson1rayquaza@hotmail.com. And Review and draw, winner gets a very special sneack peak at one of the final chapters in postlude.
Categories: Seasons > Post-Season 3 Characters: Jeremie Belpois
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed: No Word count: 30546 Read Count: 84769
Date: May 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Ummm yes that would be because i haven't reavealed much of the plot. But its coming.
Date: May 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, spelling is not my strong point. If i could just get dictaion back up.......
Categories: Ships > Other Characters: Odd Della Robbia
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 108 Read Count: 1445
Date: Mar 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Naomi
Not TOO bad. I could use some work. And even comeing from me that was short.
Categories: Ships > Other, Seasons > Post-Season 3, Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Jeremie Belpois, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
Warnings: Sex
Series: Gret Escpe
Chapters: 9
Completed: Yes Word count: 2963 Read Count: 24017
Date: Mar 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OOOOOKKKAY? Odd is spelled Odd not Od, but not to bad
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chaptrs actlly have to do with the plot, so stay tund!
Date: Apr 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Errrrr. First is Od a different peroson than Odd if not CHANGE IT! I even though I leave things out on perpouse what your doing is not giving any cryptic hints you just forgot to give any back story what so ever. You might want to give a bit of explination why there are 20 lyoko worriers.
Author's Response: I said they were 21 yers old, not that thre were more!
Categories: Ships > Other Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No Word count: 2862 Read Count: 13330
Date: May 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix
Interesting
Author's Response:
in a good or bad way?
thanx for reading by the way.
Categories: Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Seasons > Post-Season 3, Ships > Other Characters: Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: Yes Word count: 2927 Read Count: 30889
Date: Jul 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
ummmm, well it's not bad. OH, I Have An IDEA, Geo-Magnetic distubencec amplified by diposits of nikel and silicon in the beach being bombarded by charged energy particals creating a feed back loop that will cause the enitre cosline to detinated in a mass explosion. The eggs are just being effected by the geo-magnetic engergy which is weaking the eggs and embryos
Author's Response: Ok...what? I won't tell you whthr you're right or wrong, but I can tell you that I have absolty no idea what you just said. Good guss thogh!
Date: Jul 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
oh, no explosion.
Author's Response: Nope, sorry. But thre might be a tiny 1 (not litrly) at the end...
Is he back or isn't he? The Lyoko Warriors finally find the answer to this question as Xana attacks for the first time in months.
Episode #02 of Un Monde Avec Xana.
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Disclaimer: All material (excluding the actual story) does not belong to me, and is owned by MoonScoop
Categories: Seasons > Post-Season 3 Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Un Monde Avec Xana
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 4648 Read Count: 1736
Date: Jul 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 97: Past Doubts
Hey, Mrs. Hertz teaches CHEMISTRY. Gene's first of more than likely covered as a freashmen would be in BIOLOGY.
I realize in the show there was confusion sometimes but it is CHEMISTRY. But other than that very good.
Author's Response:
...whoops. >.>
No wait, I thought she taught general science. Because I don't think there are any other Science teachers at Kadic...-.-
A talent show takes place at Kadic, but the real show-stopper unfortunately proves to be Xana.
Episode #03 of Un Monde Avec Xana.
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Disclaimer: All material (excluding the actual story) does not belong to me, and is owned by MoonScoop
Categories: Seasons > Post-Season 3 Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Un Monde Avec Xana
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 4503 Read Count: 1495
Date: Jul 30, 2008 Title: #98 Talent Act
Good story, like in the show i think the discoveries were a bit rushed but the story style was nearly identical to that of the show, reminded me of season 2. Rushed but great.
Author's Response: Working on that...meep. Not very good at writing episodes at a time because they always turn out to be shorter than I want them to be. -.-
William's clone lands itself and Yumi in detention. But as Xana hacks a US military base and launches missiles at France, the Lyoko Warriors may find that Yumi's detention isn't the worst of their problems.
Episode #11 of Un Monde Avec Xana.
Original plot idea from soul of legonds.
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Disclaimer: All material (excluding the actual story) does not belong to me, and is owned by MoonScoop.
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Categories: Seasons > Post-Season 3 Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Un Monde Avec Xana
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 4982 Read Count: 974




Date: Dec 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 106: Bad Precision
eh, not a bad chapter, could have been better but hey, i didn't right is so i shouldn't complain.
Author's Response: Thanks; I know it's not great. Hopefully I can get something better out soon.