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Postby Vora Lyoko » Mon Jun 05, 2006 10:13 pm

My Teacher today said that we could give her a story.
She never said you had to. But frankly I didn't hear that.
SHE NEVER SAID THAT IT HAD TO BE IN BY TOMRROW FOR MY FINAL GRADE. And tomorrow is the last day of school for me.

I'm trying to write something but it has to be 5 chapters long and 6 pages in each chapter....

I don't know what to do. I might as well skip English tomorrow. But that would ruin my grade anyway.
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Postby Paige » Mon Jun 05, 2006 10:51 pm

Why don't you just do it, and get off the computer. You're wasting your time...

Can it be about anything? If it can, I'm sure I could give you some ideas.
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Postby Vora Lyoko » Mon Jun 05, 2006 11:39 pm

That's all I need...It's not all snap your finger and make a story just like that.
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Postby Rail Runner » Mon Jun 05, 2006 11:57 pm

what are some of the most interesting things you have done....whats the most interesting place you have traveled to...*if you have traveled*...hell...write about Code Lyoko...I am sure you can create a long enough paper about Code Lyoko...just a few ideas... ;)
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Postby Vora Lyoko » Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:26 am

Well she gave us all an idea to write about. And mine was Three Japenese Sisters with Fire powers. (Where she came up with that one I have no clue...)

I might base it off of CL but then again I don't think she would like that.
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Postby Rail Runner » Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:41 am

I must have misunderstood...sorry...I didnt realize she had already given you a topic...well...start the story off easy...and then create the surrounding scene, and then slowly buildup to the battle, then after the battle, bring it down slowly to where everything is peaceful again...maybe create 3 or 4 different happenings that occur because of the individuals...and then after the battle, show how each situation is resolved...something like that...I hope I am not confusing you.
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Postby Agent_Marquez » Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:51 am

OddxSissy Fan wrote:Well she gave us all an idea to write about. And mine was Three Japenese Sisters with Fire powers. (Where she came up with that one I have no clue...)


She might have vaguely seen Sailor Moon or other animated show for that.
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Postby 4lpha0mega » Tue Jun 06, 2006 3:01 pm

OddxSissy Fan wrote:Well she gave us all an idea to write about. And mine was Three Japenese Sisters with Fire powers. (Where she came up with that one I have no clue...)

I might base it off of CL but then again I don't think she would like that.


Based on Witch hunter Robin (possibly) ;) Although its only robin, not 3 sisters, so you wouldnt get any ideas other than the setting from fanfic
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Postby The BB of C » Tue Jun 06, 2006 4:37 pm

1) Get to work.
2) I'm going to suggest something featuring you and all of your friends. MAKE IT AN INTENSE ACTION/DRAMA WHERE YOU AND YOUR FRIENDS MUST TRAVEL TO STOP THE FORCES OF EVIL WITH THE POWERS OF GOOD AND RITEOUSNESS BACKING YOU UP!
3) Don't flip out and fly off the handle like I just did right there.
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Postby oddsgrlfriend » Tue Jun 06, 2006 5:51 pm

Do you read manga? If so base it on one. Like InuYasha. One sister could be like Kagome another like InuYasha and the last like Shippo! Just base their personalities off other characters. It's easy once you get started! Think of really cool names too!

Cool Japanese names:

-Sora (To any KH or KH2 fans reading this. Sora is a girl's name! I looked it up!)
-Rin
-Kagome
-Kagura
-Yumi
-Kisa

those are a few! Wait...there all manga/anime names...oh well! GOOD LUCK!
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Postby KingCheez » Fri Jun 09, 2006 2:28 pm

ugh ugh ugh no no no NO.

Basing it off that pre-regurgitated garbage is awful. Develop your own characters, make then your own creations, feel like you made something. That's what writing is about. Invention. If you're truly creative, sure, you may have inspiration, but trust me, make up your own characters and your own story and you'll feel like you've accomplished something. You'll feel like you've written.

(I know this is about 3 days late, whatever.)
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