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The Door [Aelitacentric, oneshot][Jeremie x Aelita]

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The Door [Aelitacentric, oneshot][Jeremie x Aelita]

Postby Stargate » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:18 pm

EDIT:

The Door: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3202014/1/

Sorry 'bout that...
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Postby Sithking Zero » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:20 pm

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Postby Darkborn » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:35 pm

Jesus, Zero. You don't have to be mean, and call Stargate an idiot!

You were once a newbie too, and I recall you having the same problems!
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Postby Sithking Zero » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:43 pm

Darkborn wrote:Jesus, Zero. You don't have to be mean, and call Stargate an idiot!

You were once a newbie too, and I recall you having the same problems!



... Sorry... (is embarassed and sorry.)
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Postby LadyLucy » Thu Oct 26, 2006 5:48 pm

OMG, I love it!! Please, do a second chappy...Please?! *big huge puppy eyes*
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Thu Oct 26, 2006 11:11 pm

Awesome one-shot, Stargate! Keep up the good work!
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Postby Vora Lyoko » Fri Oct 27, 2006 9:30 am

Very...nice..Nope...All that I can say is I love it!
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Postby CotS » Fri Oct 27, 2006 12:46 pm

hmmm.... That's very good, keep up the good work :)
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Postby Reploid CB » Fri Oct 27, 2006 3:57 pm

That is so cute~ ^^ I love a good J/A fluff fic xD ^^
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Postby Stargate » Fri Oct 27, 2006 5:28 pm

Hi...

Due to popular demand, I might upload a second chapter that sort of wraps everything up, but I'm not totally sure yet. I'm asking for your opinions...

Should I leave "The Door" open-ended? Or should I write a second chapter that gives a definite end?
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Postby Reploid CB » Fri Oct 27, 2006 5:30 pm

I dunno, it's one of those 'hard to tell' things. A second chapter might be nice (maybe one from Jeremie's perspective) but the way it is now is also good. I don't know about anyone else, but I like the open-endedness. Ultimately, it's up to the author anyway ^^
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Postby LadyLucy » Fri Oct 27, 2006 6:39 pm

Stargate wrote:Hi...

Due to popular demand, I might upload a second chapter that sort of wraps everything up, but I'm not totally sure yet. I'm asking for your opinions...

Should I leave "The Door" open-ended? Or should I write a second chapter that gives a definite end?


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Postby SnIp3r_WoLf » Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:46 pm

Wow, nice job. :thumbs up: It's a good story that has potential, I think you should write a second chapter.

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Postby Aelita91495 » Thu Feb 22, 2007 8:12 pm

Nice! Please make a chapter 2! I wanna know what Aelita and Jeremy talk about. :kissing:
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Postby Andy Waltfeld » Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:26 pm

I dunno, this seems like one of those fics where open-endedness is best.

Once you enter the room, you lose the introspective focus that the story's been built around.
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Postby yumi_yemimah » Sat Mar 31, 2007 12:28 am

I loved it so much please write more. *_* *_* :kissing: *_* *_*
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