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Full hearty meal of Revenge (Rated M)

Postby Insanity Hero » Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:15 pm

This is my first ever messed up CL fic. Please if you are under the age of 13 do not read this.

Title: Full hearty meal of Revenge
Rating: M, For swearing, sexual theme, and blood
Summary: Revenge is a dish best served cold. For William revenge is the only way to make a point that no one leaves him and get's away with it
Couples: YxU, JxA, slight WxY
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:55 pm

This fic gives me yet another reason why I should hate William Dunbar, the sickest, most twisted punk out there.

By all means, continue!
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Postby CotS » Mon Nov 06, 2006 7:09 pm

well it has a good storyline, and it makes you want to keep reading...
8/10.
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:35 pm

Interesting plotline. (I left you a review so I don't want to say the same thing.)

Continue as most would want to see what happens when the dirty bastard is finished.
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Postby Insanity Hero » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:46 pm

Chapter two is now up. Slight humor but the same old plot.
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Postby CotS » Wed Nov 08, 2006 8:47 pm

lol YAY GO YUMI! ^^

can't wait to see more.
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:34 pm

Cliffie extreme! I want to see what happens next. Am I rtight?! *crowd roars*

See, your fans want more. UPDATE SOON!
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Postby mooshie » Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:13 am

severely sick and twisted, but intriguing, all around very good to those who don't fing S&M repulsive
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Postby _stromboli__ » Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:46 pm

It's twisted. It's evil. It's slightly sick. I love it. Top of my "Guilty Pleasure" list right here. ;)
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Postby CotS » Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:05 pm

Um. don't mean to nag but when does the next chapter come out?
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:01 pm

Indeed. It's been almost a week, but then again, I have seen later cases.
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Postby _stromboli__ » Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:24 pm

Meh. Can't rush an artist I suppose. :nyeh!:
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Nov 23, 2006 6:35 pm

Yeah, I should know about that... :nyeh!:

Anyway, update please! I'm hungry! :D
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Postby Insanity Hero » Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:27 pm

Update: Yeah guess who just got their lazy butt to work on chapter three! I must warn you guys this is one is very BKO. So again please anyone under the age of 13 please do not read it. *Heck I don't know how long this fic will stay up with the way it's going*

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3232669/3/
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Postby CotS » Tue Dec 26, 2006 2:43 am

Yay an update! BOO!!! KILL WILLIAM!
...Okay I'm done.
It's not as bad as it could be, at least there's not much violence. I just hope it lasts long enough to let me see Ulrich kick his but. (that is, if that's the way you're going with this)
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:28 pm

that was pretty intense... but, what I'm thinking of right now is of the gang coming to the rescue. (lol, Ulrich... *punch kick roundhouseGUNSHOTtripunchkicksSHOTGUNuppercutBALLANDCHAINmore beating*) Kidding....

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Postby Andy Waltfeld » Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:55 pm

I haven't had this much fun with a smutfic since "Winter Warmth."

...Not like THAT. It's a story quality thing.

On a similar note, why is every other adult CL fic written like a take on Hostel? No more horror in my secks, plz.
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Postby yumi_yemimah » Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:59 pm

Good story but why isn't anyone looking for Yumi she was missing for a few days. :umm:
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Postby Vodka's Vengeance » Sun May 06, 2007 8:57 am

Oh, Insanity Hero, YOU'RE the guy who wrote that? Good job, mate! :D Update soon!
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