Well this is my first real fan fiction it is called "Hacked" Please rate it and tell me what I should do to make it better.
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Hacked
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Hacked
by Yumi Ulrich » Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:29 am
Avatar and Sig by Carth
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98% OF TEENS WON'T STAND UP FOR GOD...
REPOST THIS iF YOU'RE ONE OF THE 2% WHO WILL.
by emoBillâ„¢ » Sat Feb 14, 2009 11:19 am
Okay. Here comes an Aelita review.
This should probably be in the summary, not as the beginning sentence. But either way, it doesn't much matter, so this is just a small thing.
[quote]“Ulrich! yelled Odd. Have you see were my little digadie dog went?â€
It hasn’t been long after the gang agreed to shutdown the Supercomputer for good, at least for the time being. But little did they know that there was someone spying on them the whole time.
This should probably be in the summary, not as the beginning sentence. But either way, it doesn't much matter, so this is just a small thing.
[quote]“Ulrich! yelled Odd. Have you see were my little digadie dog went?â€
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by Yumi Ulrich » Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:03 pm
Wow. I need to change some things up I guess.
Avatar and Sig by Carth
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98% OF TEENS WON'T STAND UP FOR GOD...
REPOST THIS iF YOU'RE ONE OF THE 2% WHO WILL.
by emoBillâ„¢ » Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:47 pm
I'm just a Grammar Nazi. Don't worry about it too much. I act like that with myself, too. I proofread like everything xP
So yeah. It's a habit.
And I also have no life xP
So yeah. It's a habit.
And I also have no life xP
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by JesusFreak » Sun Feb 15, 2009 8:59 pm
Aelita should totally start sporking badfic. She's got the nazism for it. 
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by emoBillâ„¢ » Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:20 pm
'Sporking badfic'? Care to explain what that means?
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by JesusFreak » Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:31 pm
Aelita wrote:'Sporking badfic'? Care to explain what that means?
Sorry, een spending too much time around the Kingdom Hearts crazies.
Have you ever seen Mystery Science theater 3000?
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by emoBillâ„¢ » Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:54 pm
No, but I don't see how that's relevant to the post xP
Are we spamming? We should probably move this to PM.
Are we spamming? We should probably move this to PM.
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by JesusFreak » Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:10 pm
No.
"Sporking" Is also known as MST ing.
Here's the trope page. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MST
"Sporking" Is also known as MST ing.
Here's the trope page. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MST
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by emoBillâ„¢ » Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:10 pm
Aha. Don't worry, I do it to everyone. Whether it's exceptionally bad or average or exceptionally good.
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by JesusFreak » Tue Feb 17, 2009 4:51 pm
Yeah, well, you could totally do some MSTing with some snark and maybe another person.
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by emoBillâ„¢ » Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:06 pm
I have no idea what you mean, but anywho...
This story really does have potential. I just have some weird OCD that only affects certain parts of my life xP
This story really does have potential. I just have some weird OCD that only affects certain parts of my life xP
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by Phoenix Wolf » Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:39 am
With a bit of work, this fic may have potential... But you might want someone to beta read it for grammar and spelling errors. On whole it is a good start...
Where Reality Ends and Virtuality Begins!!!
Catch Ya On The Flipside!!
by emoBillâ„¢ » Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:13 am
Yeah, beta reading is always good. I'm up for it, but I don't have much spare time, so you'd have to wait a little while for each chapter.
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