Heart of a Warrior III: Warrior's Redemption

[ambitiouslove offline]

Really great so far! I really enjoy your writing style
Also I think the idea of a Mega Man + Code Lyoko crossover is a very original idea

[Sithking Zero offline]

Chapter 11 is now up. Please read it... Please?

[Phoenix Wolf offline]

You are a most talented writer Sithking Zero.

[Sithking Zero offline]

Chapter twelve is now up! READ IT NOW!!!

[Taelia offline]

I loved this particular sentence:

Jim, imagining himself as a valiant guardian of the children, stood watchful and attentive at the door to the boiler room.

[JesusFreak offline]

I guess we DON'T have such attention short attention spans, now do we?


Still, very, very well done!

[Nightsabre offline]

Quite a interesting read. Looking forward to more

[Sithking Zero offline]

Chapter nineteen is up. Please... please coment here.

[TheAppleFreak]

I haven't really taken a look at this...
Once I'm out of the public library (I don't like these keyboards so much... The Return key is HUGE and the Delete key is too small...) I think I'll take a look at it.
It sounds interesting, though.

[Sithking Zero offline]

After six months, Chapter 22: Training, is finally done! Go check it out!

[Slayer offline]

I have only just started to read this and im only on chapter three but im loving the threats of franz hopper:D

if you try ANYTHING funny with Aelita, and I mean anything at all, I will trap you in a scanner and virtualize you into the digital sea myself. Are we in agreement?

[Sithking Zero offline]

Chapter 25 is up, and it's a doozy. Check it out and tell me what you think!

[Taelia offline]

Sithking, you write more about Jim than the show's writers do!