All of you over at UMSD already saw these. But, I was bored one day, so I'm going to be doing CL transcripts!
Yeah...these contain a lot of opinions, but enough fact to balance it out. If you find that I typed something you find offensive, tell me through post or PM, and I'll change it.
Here's the Season 1 theme song transcript I did as a practice. I'm about halfway through TeddyGoZilla as well.
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A World Without Danger, 1.0
The Code Lyoko Theme Song, Season 1
Transcripted by Carthage (Carth_upon_a_star)
Hi! Wow, first CL scripty, and it's near pointless. Anyway, For the singing, I'll do two lines, then detail what happened while those lines were sung, kay? Good, kay? Hee. I say 'kay' too much. Kay?
The cartoon before this one ends. That wierd Miguzi chick says a line and throws the disc at whatever she's throwing it at. If this is a Season 2 episode, the Season 2 theme is shown instead. I'll get to that...possibly never. Otherwise, keep reading.
The music starts. A blue screen pops up (think blue Matrix) with a logo on it-three blue bubbles-and says-
Antefilms Production
underneath- it is the Antefilms logo. It stays for a time, then dissappears. The following words are typed on the blue screen.
IN CO-PRODUCTION WITH
france 3 and Canal J
They dissappear, and are replaced with the XANA logo. These words type across:
CODE LYOKO
The words that started it all ^^. This whole thing goes away and is replaced with the famous 'going-through-the wires' shot. These words type across:
EXECUTIVE PRODUCERS
Chrisophe and Benoit di SABATINO
Man, these French dudes have cool names! Anyway, the type dissappears. Some other type comes up that I can't read that well because of the rating logo. I'll make it out the best I can.
PRODUCED BY
Nicolas ATLAN
Hey, I think I got it! Okay, lyrics start! They may not be exact.
Noam (the group singing this): Here we are, goin far, to save all that we love-
Scenes start! First, we have the ever-cutie-pie of doom, Jeremie. Anyway, he walks into a scene, blocking Yumi, who was already there. The scene behind him pixelates into a pinkshade view of the factory computer with the XANA logo. He moves into another pose beside it. The following words are there:
GRAPHIC BIBLE
Tania PALUMBO and Thomas ROMAIN
Noam: If we give all we've got we will make it through-
Nother J'Dawg scene! He's working on the compy in his room. Glasses glowing, he pushes a button on the keyboard. The scene pixelates into one of Yumi. She smiles. Aww. The same thing happens to her with pinkscreen as with Jeremie, except she's in her Lyoko form, the background is the mountain region, and she's actually moving. The words CODE LYOKO are under her.
Noam: Cause we are like a star shining bright on your world today-make evil go away!
Cut to a scene of Ulrich lounging. He gets up. Pinkscreen thing again, except he's got these swirly things behind him and there's this text-
LITERARY BIBLE
Tania PALUMBO/Carlo de BOUTINY
Thomas ROMAIN
Odd time! He smiles like the cute beast he is.
Noam: Code Lyoko will reset it all, Code Lyoko be there when you call-
Pinkscreen again! It's the forest region, with paw thingies behind him. CODE LYOKO text again. He fires a laser arrow. And along came Aelita! She smiles as well. More pinkscreen. She has matrix-binary behind her, as well as the desert region and this text:
"CODE LYOKO" (Main Title)
Preformed by Noam
Lyrics by Noam
Music by Franck KELLER/ Ygal AMAR
ANTEFILMS PRODUCTION Publishing
Ygal? What kind of name is that? Hopefully a mistake on my part.
Noam: Code Lyoko we will stand real tall-
Cut to Aelita deactivating a tower. As the interfaces fall in, more text pops up.
DIRECTED BY
Jerome MOUSCADET
ARTISTIC DIRECTOR
Tania PALUMBO
A time reset goes off.
Noam: Code Lyoko stronger after all.
Final theme song scene! 'CODE LYOKO' types across a XANA symbol on a Matrix background, with our heroes in front of it, from left to right-Aelita, virtualized (remember, this was when she was Lyoko-bound. Seems like so long ago...), Ulrich, chillin, Yumi, looking triumphant, Odd, huggling Kiwi, and mah great doomy Jeremie, in all his great beasty nerdy glory. The letters shine, the screen goes black (there's a cool visual trick, if you stare at it hard, you can see a color negative of the scene for a millisecond when it goes black), the music stops, and the episode begins.
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END OF A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER, 1.0
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Uh, yeah...CL Transcripts!
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by bduddy » Wed Nov 30, 2005 10:42 pm
I'm assuming they're something like a storyboard and script draft, respectively.
Oh noes! Must comply with the Grammar Policing Mods... hahaha, just kidding.
Oh noes! Must comply with the Grammar Policing Mods... hahaha, just kidding.
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I like short signatures. Do you?
by Carth » Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:34 am
Thanks for the feedback!
Here's part one of TGZ. I am not a speed demon, I had this done for weeks.
Script contains some Sissi bashing, old voice bashing, and...yeah. I'll change it if you want me to. I've edited out most objectionalities. Sorry, it's my way. I can't avoid it.
EDIT: Fixed some errors (such as Aelita's eye color)
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TeddyGoZilla
A wierd ep of Code: Lyoko
Transcripted by Carthage
PART ONE
Yay! Finally, some REAL transcripting!
Title screen is shown-the old blue screen type. 'TEDDYGOZILLA' types across. The little mouse pointer goes down and clicks a window, which has these words:
WRITTEN BY
FRED LENOIR
STORYBOARD
THOMAS ASTRUC
Cut to Kadic's...main building, I guess.
Milly (o.s.): Okay, are we rolling?
Screen changes to an unsteady camera view that's recording. It adjusts to view Milly, the school newscaster, but, as said by Tamiya:
Tamiya (o.s.): Yeah, but we're upside down!
Tamiya, the camerawoman, adjusts the view again, so we now see Milly correctly.
Milly (o.s.): Hello, fellow students of Kadic Junior High!
Milly is a short girl with short red hair tied back into pigtails and a pink sweater. She speaks into a microphone.
Milly: Your ace reporters Milly and Tamiya are here to bring you an exclusive for today's school news, and it's really big! Since, as I'm pretty sure you already know, tonight is the big night-
Tamiya slides the camera over to view a door, and then the floor.
Milly (o.s.): The night of our annual school prom!
'Prom', eh? Probably a mistranslation. The camera screen goes fuzzy and cuts to a pair of doors that lead to the gym. Inside the gym, two familliar people are seen adjusting a ladder, who I'll describe for boredom's sake- Ulrich, the brown-haired kid, and Odd, the blond one with the cool hair and the purple shirt. Of course, you should know this, but still...For those who aren't familliar with the show...There also seems to be a 'ghost woman', but it's actually a reflection of Tamiya on the glass. Nice touch ^^ Pan over to Milly.
Milly: Unfortunately, our cameras weren't authorized to film the site where the festivites will take place. But I can make out, from where I'm speaking-
She waves her finger in front of the camera. Hm...
Milly: -the girl who might be crowned our Beauty Queen tonight-
Beauty Queen? Pah. Pah, I say.
Milly: -Just as she was last year. I mean, of course, our principal's daughter, Sissi! Let's see whether she'll answer a few questions! Well, Sissi, how about a few words-
Pan over to the three biggest jerks in the entire show (well, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th biggest, the biggest is XANA). There's Herb, or 'Herve' (we'll call him by the former), the boy with black hair, glasses, and a zit problem that almost rivals the one I'm having right now. Behind him is Nicolas, the 'bloke' (don't you just love British words?) of the group, with blond hair and rather sloppy sense in fashion. And then, there's the blackwad herself, Sissi Delmas, second biggest jerk(ess) on the show-so much as jerk, her proper name is expressed in an altrenate understanding of her own, with the spelling changed for censoric reasons. She has black hair, a belly baring shirt, and a very nasty expression. Actually, they all look pretty miffed.
Milly (o.s.): -for our TV audience before the big night?
Sissi: Sorry, munchkins.
A little interesting tidbit-Sissi's voice, along with Odd's and (gag) Jeremie's, are very different in this and a few other eps-Odd and Sissi because of actor switches, and Jer because of...sounding off from the character, I guess. Sissi's gets higher, squeakier, and a little less nasally. I actually quite like both voices. Anyway, Herb comes forward and grabs the lens of the camera. I really have to stop with this long-windedness.
Sissi (os): I only talk to real, pro reporters.
Cut to Herb and Tamiya. Herb pushes Tamiya, who we can now see is about the same height as Milly, African...French, and has on a yellow shirt and green pants.
Sissi (os): I have no time to waste on a couple of nerds.
Tamiya looks at Sissi, shocked. Cut to Milly.
Milly: But, it's for the school news program! What about freedom of the press?
Sissi turns around and glares her in the eye.
Sissi: Oh, Milly, little dipsticks your age don't HAVE any freedom, understand? Anyway, who needs your dumb reporting?
Nicolas and Herb walk up. The UGLYNESS! *gags*
Sissi: What do you know?
Closeup on Sissi.
Sissi: Besides, you've got a problem. Don't forget you have to have a date-
She glances over.
Sissi: -And I don't know anyone who'd wanna go with a jerk like you.
JERK?! Watch yer mouth, chick-and go read a dictionairy while you're at it. Cut to Milly, Herb, and Nicolas. I feel sorry for Milly in this episode...
Sissi (os): Even them. I bet if you asked them-
Nicolas and Herb back away from her while making little sicky noises. They walk away as Sissi says these lines, revealing Odd and Ulrich in the doorway, COMPLETELY motionless as they work...
Sissi (os): -They'd run like scared rabbits.
Milly:(choking back tears)Who needs them? There are lots of other boys!
Sissi (os): Oh yeah? What are you waiting for, then?
Milly looks over at Ulrich, still completely motionless as he stares at the ladder. (Yay! Cheapness.)
Sissi (os): Try and find one!
She laughs the classic 'prep laugh'. Man, whoever voiced her in the beginning was GOOD. Jodi's fits better, though.
Milly: Uhh...uh...Ulrich?
Ulrich turns his head. FINALLY! Some main character action!
Milly: Would you...
Cut to Milly. She blushes, and tears fall from her eyes.
Milly: Would you be my date tonight?
Cut to Ulrich, who blushes. Odd looks like he's stifiling a laugh.
Ulrich: Uhh...I'm sorry, Milly.
He scratches his head as Yumi-a Japanese girl dressed in all black (but not goth) who's also a main character-comes down the ladder. (So that's what he was staring at...
)
Ulrich: (ackwardly)It...wouldn't be a very good idea.
He shrugs.
Ulrich: I'm too old for you.
Closeup on Ulrich and Yumi.
Ulrich: And uh...well, you see...I promised to go with Yumi.
They both blush and look away from each other.
Sissi (os): Y'see?
She laughs again. Pan across to her, Nicolas, Herb, and a heartbroken Milly.
Sissi: What'd I tell you?
She folds her arms.
Sissi: But don't worry, Milly. I'm sure you'll find a boy for the Sandbox Dance.
Okay, now THAT was just MEAN. Cut to Milly and Tamiya.
Sissi (os): Meanwhile, why don't you go play with your dolls?
Even meaner. Tamiya puts a hand on Milly's shoulder. Cut to the door leading out of the building. Milly bursts out, crying into her arm. (Man, Sissi was annoying in the first season.). Cut back to our terrible three. Tamiya runs past them.
Tamiya: Milly, Milly wait!
Sissi smiles evilly.
Yumi (os): I hope you're proud of yourself.
They look behind them in mild shock. Yumi, Ulrich, and Odd are standing outside the door, and they don't look happy. Sissi just gives them a nasty look.
Cut to the Kadic dorm building, and then to Jeremie's room. YAY! Teh cutie of the century, and you're staring at his back, folks. He's working at his computer, as usual. Closeup on him. He looks like a bit of a 'nerd'-he has blond hair, black-rimmed glasses (he'd look a lot better with half specs...half-specs are cool...), a blue turtleneck sweater, khakis (though you can't see em at the moment), and he's just generally CUTE. He also has on a little headset at the moment. He presses a few keys...we get the going through the wires thing...
Aand...FIRST 3D SHOT OF LYOKO IN THE SHOW! Yay. It's the Desert Region. We seem to be soaring through it...Jeremie speaks through the headset into Lyoko.
Jeremie(os): Aelita?
AAK! THAT VOICE! It's his ABSOLUTELY GRATING old voice. This one doesn't suit his character. The new one fits a bit better.
Jeremie(os): This is Jeremie, do you read me?
We come up on 'Aelita'-the mystery girl from another world. She has pink hair, elfen ears, and a pretty cool outfit. Her eyes are closed at the moment, but they're green.
Jeremie (os): Aelita?
360 degree shot of Aelita. As we come to the front, she seems to stir. Cut to Jeremie's computer screen. A screen with a 'Matrix' background pops up. Aelita appears.
Aelita: Hi! How are you?
Hm...her voice sounds a lot more full and grown up at this point. Probably the echo effect or something. Cut to Jeremie. OH NO! MORE OLD VOICE TALK! He sounds like the current Sissi...sorta...
Jeremie: Uh, I'm fine. How about you?
Cut back to the compy screen. Good, no more evil voice.
Aelita: Okay. I didn't see anything unusual around the towers. It all seems quiet. Well, for the moment.
Cut back to Jeremie. He sounds very nervous.
Jeremie: Y'know...I'm making progress with my research, so...so you can come and live with us.
Steaming up, eh? Aelita's transmission fills the screen. She looks happy.
Aelita: The key to materialization? You've found it at last?
Cut to behind Jeremie-phew.
Jeremie: Uh, well, no, not yet...
He scratches his head.
Jeremie: But...I'm working on it. It's just a matter of time. Then XANA won't be able to do anything to harm you. Or us.
Back to Aelita.
Aelita: That's great. Thanks.
Aww, so cute...and Jerseppy's old voice was okay. Despite what I've said, it's kinda cute, it just doesn't fit. White fade to a sadder scene-Milly crying on her teddy bear (of doom, as we shall later see).
Tamiya (os): Milly, don't cry.
Shot change. We now see that this is Milly and Tamiya's dorm room. Tamiya is leaning on a bed as Milly sits behind it, hugging her teddy bear and crying.
Tamiya: We'll go to the prom, you'll see. As for the news, Jim said it was okay.
She puts a hand on Milly's shoulder and sits up in an attempt to brighten the mood.
Tamiya: We have until nine o' clock.
Milly:(crying) Oh, it's a waste of time!
Cut to their computer screens. Their images are reflected in the screen. Milly wipes a tear from her eye.
Milly: Better face facts, Tamiya, they don't care about us or the newscast!
A symbol appears on the screen-bright red, it's a bullseye shape, with one 'nub' on top and three on the bottom. XANA's symbol. He has launched an attack. And he's...spying on young girls? The pervert...
Milly: Oh, I hate them, all of them!
Poor Milly. Zoom in on this grim scene.
Milly: I hate every single one of them! I hate everybody in the world!
Cut to the hall outside the dorms. Milly begins sobbing loudly offscreen.
Tamiya (os): You don't know what you're saying. It's just that-
Milly (os): Oh stop it! I'm sick of you too so just leave me alone!
She bursts out of the dorm with her teddy bear, sobbing. Tamiya leans out after her as she runs out of the building.
Tamiya: Hey!
Cut to her.
Tamiya: It's true. Ulrich could've been a little nicer.
Yeah, he could've. Speaking of him...cut to the place (the gym?) where Ulrich and co. are setting up the prom. Ulrich is taping wires to the ground with a slightly angry look on his face.(Angry..you'll see this with Ulrich a lot.). Yumi is sitting on the stage behind him.
Yumi: Don't look so gloomy, Ulrich.
He tears off another strip of tape with his teeth.
Yumi: Is it because of Milly? You couldv'e said yes...
Odd walks onstage, twirling a microphone cord (with a microphone on the end...) like it's a baton.
Yumi: Y'know me and the prom...
I can't exactly figure out that last statement. Anyway, Odd speaks into the microphone. He has a voice actor switch in this ep as well, but you can't really tell right now.
Odd: Even if I was your date?
Cut to a pretty nasty sight-Sissi is preening herself in the disco ball.
Ulrich (os): Sissi really did come on strong. If meanness is one of the qualities of a beauty queen-
Cut back to them.
Ulrich: -She'll get reelected all right.
Jeremie walks over with a box of stuffs and sets it down.
Jeremie: That's true, but try to get Miss World to see that.
Odd: Miss World, huh?
He now speaks into the microphone.
Odd: Miss In-her-own-world is more like it!
Everyone laughs, except Sissi. She looks pretty angry.
Cut to the Kadic grounds, and pan over to an old toolshed. Cut to Milly, who is inside, talking to her teddy bear. She sighs.
Milly: At least you don't care how old I am, do you?
Cut to the bear. He kinda reminds me of Schmee from SQUEE (yes peeps, beware, for I AM A JHONEN FAN!).
Milly (os): We understand each other. We're not like those dumb older kids who always want to run things.
Cut to the two of them.
Milly: They think that because we're young we don't count at all.
Cut back to the bear.
Milly (os): If for once, we were older-
Cut to a lamp. It flickers suspiciously...
Milly (os): -A lot older than them, they wouldn't laugh at us, would they?
Tamiya (os): Milly?
Milly gasps and looks over. Tamiya is outside, knocking on the glass.
Tamiya: Are you in there? Are you finished sulking? Hurry, we have work to do!
Cut to the outside. Tamiya is standing on an old Dumpster.
Milly (os): Okay, okay, I'm coming.
Back inside, Milly sets the bear down.
Milly: You, stay right there.
She puts a finger on his nose and winks.
Milly: I'll be back for you.
She comes out of the toolshed. Cut back to the inside...
Tamiya (os): We have a report to finish on the prom, remember?
Cut to the lamp, still sizzling. A black shadow- the Shroud of XANA, I call it-covers the lightbulb. He's attacking. The Shroud materializes into a thin wisp-remember when this was all he could do?-and surrounds the bear. His eyes convert into XANA's symbols.
Cut to the outside. Something roars...fade out.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART ONE
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Yay ^^
Here's part one of TGZ. I am not a speed demon, I had this done for weeks.
Script contains some Sissi bashing, old voice bashing, and...yeah. I'll change it if you want me to. I've edited out most objectionalities. Sorry, it's my way. I can't avoid it.
EDIT: Fixed some errors (such as Aelita's eye color)
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TeddyGoZilla
A wierd ep of Code: Lyoko
Transcripted by Carthage
PART ONE
Yay! Finally, some REAL transcripting!
Title screen is shown-the old blue screen type. 'TEDDYGOZILLA' types across. The little mouse pointer goes down and clicks a window, which has these words:
WRITTEN BY
FRED LENOIR
STORYBOARD
THOMAS ASTRUC
Cut to Kadic's...main building, I guess.
Milly (o.s.): Okay, are we rolling?
Screen changes to an unsteady camera view that's recording. It adjusts to view Milly, the school newscaster, but, as said by Tamiya:
Tamiya (o.s.): Yeah, but we're upside down!
Tamiya, the camerawoman, adjusts the view again, so we now see Milly correctly.
Milly (o.s.): Hello, fellow students of Kadic Junior High!
Milly is a short girl with short red hair tied back into pigtails and a pink sweater. She speaks into a microphone.
Milly: Your ace reporters Milly and Tamiya are here to bring you an exclusive for today's school news, and it's really big! Since, as I'm pretty sure you already know, tonight is the big night-
Tamiya slides the camera over to view a door, and then the floor.
Milly (o.s.): The night of our annual school prom!
'Prom', eh? Probably a mistranslation. The camera screen goes fuzzy and cuts to a pair of doors that lead to the gym. Inside the gym, two familliar people are seen adjusting a ladder, who I'll describe for boredom's sake- Ulrich, the brown-haired kid, and Odd, the blond one with the cool hair and the purple shirt. Of course, you should know this, but still...For those who aren't familliar with the show...There also seems to be a 'ghost woman', but it's actually a reflection of Tamiya on the glass. Nice touch ^^ Pan over to Milly.
Milly: Unfortunately, our cameras weren't authorized to film the site where the festivites will take place. But I can make out, from where I'm speaking-
She waves her finger in front of the camera. Hm...
Milly: -the girl who might be crowned our Beauty Queen tonight-
Beauty Queen? Pah. Pah, I say.
Milly: -Just as she was last year. I mean, of course, our principal's daughter, Sissi! Let's see whether she'll answer a few questions! Well, Sissi, how about a few words-
Pan over to the three biggest jerks in the entire show (well, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th biggest, the biggest is XANA). There's Herb, or 'Herve' (we'll call him by the former), the boy with black hair, glasses, and a zit problem that almost rivals the one I'm having right now. Behind him is Nicolas, the 'bloke' (don't you just love British words?) of the group, with blond hair and rather sloppy sense in fashion. And then, there's the blackwad herself, Sissi Delmas, second biggest jerk(ess) on the show-so much as jerk, her proper name is expressed in an altrenate understanding of her own, with the spelling changed for censoric reasons. She has black hair, a belly baring shirt, and a very nasty expression. Actually, they all look pretty miffed.
Milly (o.s.): -for our TV audience before the big night?
Sissi: Sorry, munchkins.
A little interesting tidbit-Sissi's voice, along with Odd's and (gag) Jeremie's, are very different in this and a few other eps-Odd and Sissi because of actor switches, and Jer because of...sounding off from the character, I guess. Sissi's gets higher, squeakier, and a little less nasally. I actually quite like both voices. Anyway, Herb comes forward and grabs the lens of the camera. I really have to stop with this long-windedness.
Sissi (os): I only talk to real, pro reporters.
Cut to Herb and Tamiya. Herb pushes Tamiya, who we can now see is about the same height as Milly, African...French, and has on a yellow shirt and green pants.
Sissi (os): I have no time to waste on a couple of nerds.
Tamiya looks at Sissi, shocked. Cut to Milly.
Milly: But, it's for the school news program! What about freedom of the press?
Sissi turns around and glares her in the eye.
Sissi: Oh, Milly, little dipsticks your age don't HAVE any freedom, understand? Anyway, who needs your dumb reporting?
Nicolas and Herb walk up. The UGLYNESS! *gags*
Sissi: What do you know?
Closeup on Sissi.
Sissi: Besides, you've got a problem. Don't forget you have to have a date-
She glances over.
Sissi: -And I don't know anyone who'd wanna go with a jerk like you.
JERK?! Watch yer mouth, chick-and go read a dictionairy while you're at it. Cut to Milly, Herb, and Nicolas. I feel sorry for Milly in this episode...
Sissi (os): Even them. I bet if you asked them-
Nicolas and Herb back away from her while making little sicky noises. They walk away as Sissi says these lines, revealing Odd and Ulrich in the doorway, COMPLETELY motionless as they work...
Sissi (os): -They'd run like scared rabbits.
Milly:(choking back tears)Who needs them? There are lots of other boys!
Sissi (os): Oh yeah? What are you waiting for, then?
Milly looks over at Ulrich, still completely motionless as he stares at the ladder. (Yay! Cheapness.)
Sissi (os): Try and find one!
She laughs the classic 'prep laugh'. Man, whoever voiced her in the beginning was GOOD. Jodi's fits better, though.
Milly: Uhh...uh...Ulrich?
Ulrich turns his head. FINALLY! Some main character action!
Milly: Would you...
Cut to Milly. She blushes, and tears fall from her eyes.
Milly: Would you be my date tonight?
Cut to Ulrich, who blushes. Odd looks like he's stifiling a laugh.
Ulrich: Uhh...I'm sorry, Milly.
He scratches his head as Yumi-a Japanese girl dressed in all black (but not goth) who's also a main character-comes down the ladder. (So that's what he was staring at...
)
Ulrich: (ackwardly)It...wouldn't be a very good idea.
He shrugs.
Ulrich: I'm too old for you.
Closeup on Ulrich and Yumi.
Ulrich: And uh...well, you see...I promised to go with Yumi.
They both blush and look away from each other.
Sissi (os): Y'see?
She laughs again. Pan across to her, Nicolas, Herb, and a heartbroken Milly.
Sissi: What'd I tell you?
She folds her arms.
Sissi: But don't worry, Milly. I'm sure you'll find a boy for the Sandbox Dance.
Okay, now THAT was just MEAN. Cut to Milly and Tamiya.
Sissi (os): Meanwhile, why don't you go play with your dolls?
Even meaner. Tamiya puts a hand on Milly's shoulder. Cut to the door leading out of the building. Milly bursts out, crying into her arm. (Man, Sissi was annoying in the first season.). Cut back to our terrible three. Tamiya runs past them.
Tamiya: Milly, Milly wait!
Sissi smiles evilly.
Yumi (os): I hope you're proud of yourself.
They look behind them in mild shock. Yumi, Ulrich, and Odd are standing outside the door, and they don't look happy. Sissi just gives them a nasty look.
Cut to the Kadic dorm building, and then to Jeremie's room. YAY! Teh cutie of the century, and you're staring at his back, folks. He's working at his computer, as usual. Closeup on him. He looks like a bit of a 'nerd'-he has blond hair, black-rimmed glasses (he'd look a lot better with half specs...half-specs are cool...), a blue turtleneck sweater, khakis (though you can't see em at the moment), and he's just generally CUTE. He also has on a little headset at the moment. He presses a few keys...we get the going through the wires thing...
Aand...FIRST 3D SHOT OF LYOKO IN THE SHOW! Yay. It's the Desert Region. We seem to be soaring through it...Jeremie speaks through the headset into Lyoko.
Jeremie(os): Aelita?
AAK! THAT VOICE! It's his ABSOLUTELY GRATING old voice. This one doesn't suit his character. The new one fits a bit better.
Jeremie(os): This is Jeremie, do you read me?
We come up on 'Aelita'-the mystery girl from another world. She has pink hair, elfen ears, and a pretty cool outfit. Her eyes are closed at the moment, but they're green.
Jeremie (os): Aelita?
360 degree shot of Aelita. As we come to the front, she seems to stir. Cut to Jeremie's computer screen. A screen with a 'Matrix' background pops up. Aelita appears.
Aelita: Hi! How are you?
Hm...her voice sounds a lot more full and grown up at this point. Probably the echo effect or something. Cut to Jeremie. OH NO! MORE OLD VOICE TALK! He sounds like the current Sissi...sorta...
Jeremie: Uh, I'm fine. How about you?
Cut back to the compy screen. Good, no more evil voice.
Aelita: Okay. I didn't see anything unusual around the towers. It all seems quiet. Well, for the moment.
Cut back to Jeremie. He sounds very nervous.
Jeremie: Y'know...I'm making progress with my research, so...so you can come and live with us.
Steaming up, eh? Aelita's transmission fills the screen. She looks happy.
Aelita: The key to materialization? You've found it at last?
Cut to behind Jeremie-phew.
Jeremie: Uh, well, no, not yet...
He scratches his head.
Jeremie: But...I'm working on it. It's just a matter of time. Then XANA won't be able to do anything to harm you. Or us.
Back to Aelita.
Aelita: That's great. Thanks.
Aww, so cute...and Jerseppy's old voice was okay. Despite what I've said, it's kinda cute, it just doesn't fit. White fade to a sadder scene-Milly crying on her teddy bear (of doom, as we shall later see).
Tamiya (os): Milly, don't cry.
Shot change. We now see that this is Milly and Tamiya's dorm room. Tamiya is leaning on a bed as Milly sits behind it, hugging her teddy bear and crying.
Tamiya: We'll go to the prom, you'll see. As for the news, Jim said it was okay.
She puts a hand on Milly's shoulder and sits up in an attempt to brighten the mood.
Tamiya: We have until nine o' clock.
Milly:(crying) Oh, it's a waste of time!
Cut to their computer screens. Their images are reflected in the screen. Milly wipes a tear from her eye.
Milly: Better face facts, Tamiya, they don't care about us or the newscast!
A symbol appears on the screen-bright red, it's a bullseye shape, with one 'nub' on top and three on the bottom. XANA's symbol. He has launched an attack. And he's...spying on young girls? The pervert...
Milly: Oh, I hate them, all of them!
Poor Milly. Zoom in on this grim scene.
Milly: I hate every single one of them! I hate everybody in the world!
Cut to the hall outside the dorms. Milly begins sobbing loudly offscreen.
Tamiya (os): You don't know what you're saying. It's just that-
Milly (os): Oh stop it! I'm sick of you too so just leave me alone!
She bursts out of the dorm with her teddy bear, sobbing. Tamiya leans out after her as she runs out of the building.
Tamiya: Hey!
Cut to her.
Tamiya: It's true. Ulrich could've been a little nicer.
Yeah, he could've. Speaking of him...cut to the place (the gym?) where Ulrich and co. are setting up the prom. Ulrich is taping wires to the ground with a slightly angry look on his face.(Angry..you'll see this with Ulrich a lot.). Yumi is sitting on the stage behind him.
Yumi: Don't look so gloomy, Ulrich.
He tears off another strip of tape with his teeth.
Yumi: Is it because of Milly? You couldv'e said yes...
Odd walks onstage, twirling a microphone cord (with a microphone on the end...) like it's a baton.
Yumi: Y'know me and the prom...
I can't exactly figure out that last statement. Anyway, Odd speaks into the microphone. He has a voice actor switch in this ep as well, but you can't really tell right now.
Odd: Even if I was your date?
Cut to a pretty nasty sight-Sissi is preening herself in the disco ball.
Ulrich (os): Sissi really did come on strong. If meanness is one of the qualities of a beauty queen-
Cut back to them.
Ulrich: -She'll get reelected all right.
Jeremie walks over with a box of stuffs and sets it down.
Jeremie: That's true, but try to get Miss World to see that.
Odd: Miss World, huh?
He now speaks into the microphone.
Odd: Miss In-her-own-world is more like it!
Everyone laughs, except Sissi. She looks pretty angry.
Cut to the Kadic grounds, and pan over to an old toolshed. Cut to Milly, who is inside, talking to her teddy bear. She sighs.
Milly: At least you don't care how old I am, do you?
Cut to the bear. He kinda reminds me of Schmee from SQUEE (yes peeps, beware, for I AM A JHONEN FAN!).
Milly (os): We understand each other. We're not like those dumb older kids who always want to run things.
Cut to the two of them.
Milly: They think that because we're young we don't count at all.
Cut back to the bear.
Milly (os): If for once, we were older-
Cut to a lamp. It flickers suspiciously...
Milly (os): -A lot older than them, they wouldn't laugh at us, would they?
Tamiya (os): Milly?
Milly gasps and looks over. Tamiya is outside, knocking on the glass.
Tamiya: Are you in there? Are you finished sulking? Hurry, we have work to do!
Cut to the outside. Tamiya is standing on an old Dumpster.
Milly (os): Okay, okay, I'm coming.
Back inside, Milly sets the bear down.
Milly: You, stay right there.
She puts a finger on his nose and winks.
Milly: I'll be back for you.
She comes out of the toolshed. Cut back to the inside...
Tamiya (os): We have a report to finish on the prom, remember?
Cut to the lamp, still sizzling. A black shadow- the Shroud of XANA, I call it-covers the lightbulb. He's attacking. The Shroud materializes into a thin wisp-remember when this was all he could do?-and surrounds the bear. His eyes convert into XANA's symbols.
Cut to the outside. Something roars...fade out.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART ONE
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Yay ^^
Last edited by Carth on Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.
by Carth » Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:48 pm
I guess this isn't double posting...as I want to get this to you...after this, though, you'll have to wait, as I'm not done with Part 3 yet.
PART TWO
Commercial break ends. Fade in on a dorm hallway. Sissi is walking down the hall, Nicolas and Herb in tow. She puts a key in the lock of her dorm as the two uglies of doom just stare at her.
Sissi: Hey, I hope you two aren't going to follow me around all day long. As far as I know, you're not beautitions(can't figure that word out), so stop sticking to me like glue.
Meeean Sissi. She waves her hand in a I'm-so-much-better-dan-yuus fashion at them (up and down).
Sissi: I don't need you, understand, so scat!
'Scat'? Who SAYS that anymore? She enters her dorm. Herb and Nicolas just stare at each other, groaning. Then, Herb tries to talk to her. He puts his fingers together nervously.
Herb: Sissi, we... we thought-
Sissi leans out of her room angrily.
Sissi: Take this advice. Don't think, it doesn't suit you.
She slams the door in their faces. Herb and Nicolas just make some more them-esque noises. Cut to Sissi's room. She is leaning against the door, smiling as the boys are heard walking away. She brushes her hair out of her face with a cool attitude, and walks over to her bed. She sits down-cut to under the bed. More pervertation from XANA. Sissi kicks off her shoes.
Sissi: A bunch of babies at our prom.
She takes off her pants. Oooh, bad XANA, bad XANA...
Sissi: They've gotta be kidding.
Off of XANA-view, she presses a button on her stereo, starting some very rhythm-heavy music. She walks back across the room on XANA-vision again. Off again, she opens her closet. She has shed her shirt as well, don't worry kiddies, she's in a bra. Still...0o
Sissi: And that other freak who had the nerve to invite Ulrich-can't believe it.
She stands there, in her underwear, looking through her closet. Cut to the floor. Something pulls a sheet (?) away... Cut back. Sissi is throwing stuff out of her closet, including the pants she will wear later.
Sissi: If anybody's going out with Ulrich, It absolutely has to be me.
She sticks a white dress against herself, then throws it aside. She places a hand on her chest and pushes her hair aside again, for effect more than purpouse.
Sissi: I am the star, the diva of the school.
Okay, and she's telling herself this? Try harder, babe. On XANA-view once more, she walks away from the closet. The view seems to move towards a curtain. Meanwhile, Sissi sits down at a vanity, with all her various makeup stuffs she doesn't need. The view peeks through the curtain at her. (Eeeww...). She preens herself in the mirror. Back with XANA, we walk toward her trash can. Two loud thumps are heard. Sissi turns around, and lowers the volume of her music. She sees nothing. Actually, XANA has switched position to get a better look at her...o-kay. She makes faces in the mirror, probably practicing for flirting with Ulrich. (Speaking of him, where are our mains? This ep seems to focus on minor characters). She scratches her butt...puts on a pimple strip...something creeps from behind her...she removes the pimple strip...closer...she picks up some cucumbers...XANA is now directly above her. She puts the cucumbers on her eyes, along with her mud mask (oh, god, she's 12 for pete's sake). A few bottles rattle on the top shelf. Sissi whirls around, like a morning nightmare. Finally, some dialogue!
Sissi: Who's there? Answer me, who is it?
The bottles continue to rattle. She takes the cucumbers (my sis thought they were pickles) off her eyes as the bottles fall down, along with the rest of those shelves. She falls back, mud mask gone, as perfumes and powders fill the air, and caps roll past her. (Seriously...). She runs out of her room. In her underoos. Not the smartest thing to do.
Cut to the Kadic main building, and pan down. A crowd has gathered, and it grows fast. The door opens, and Mr. Delmas, the principal, and his daughter step out offscreen. Cut to them. Mr. Delmas, who we have not yet seen, is a gray-haired man in a brown suit. Sissi is standing with him, in a blue bathrobe, wearing her mud mask once again. She is crying into her sleeve.
Mr. Delmas: Move along, back to your dorms, everything is just fine.
He waves everyone on. Cut to Milly and Tamiya, who are in the crowd.
Milly: Looks as if we got ourselves a super scoop.
Tamiya takes a Polaroid picture. (Very interesting picture if you pause it right when the flash goes off.). Mr. Delmas leads Sissi away as the Lyokian Warriors Minus One (this is what I'll call them in Season 1) look on from under a nearby arch. FINALLY!
Odd: What do you say we take a look to make sure that our old friend XANA isn't behind this?
Yumi: Mmm hmm...
Now you can tell Odd's voice difference. It's almost worse than Jer's. His new voice fits him MUCH better. YEAH FOR GEZCEH! Cut to just outside Sissi's dorm. Ulrich leans against a wall, Odd is crouched down, and Yumi and Jeremie are standing up. The latter three are looking inside. The place looks like even more of a mess than before.
Ulrich: Whaddyou think?
Jeremie: A simple short circut. Too many appliances plugged in at the same time.
Closeup on Yumi.
Yumi: Yeah. Hi-fi, lights, lady shaver, curling iron, altogether, what do you expect to happen?
She flounces off.
Odd (os): Not to mention the Brain Stimulator.
He laughs as we pan across to J'Dawg. He looks thoughtfully into the room.
Odd (os): Although she probably never figured out how to use it.
Cut to a front view of Jeremie in all his bishonerd glory. ('Bishonerd' is my word for cartoon guys like Jeremie, Dib, etc. Cute nerds.). He walks away, still thinking.
Jeremie: Hmm...
From behind to door, Milly checks to see if Jeremie is gone, when confirmed, she and Tamiya stand in the doorway and take a picture of the scene...
Cut to the inside of the toolshed. Milly and Tamiya's voices are heard from the outside.
Milly (os): I dunno what happened, but if you ask me, Sissi had it coming.
The door opens, and Milly and Tamiya attempt to walk in.
Tamiya: I couldn't agree with you more.
They are both stopped cold by something. They gasp. The toolshed is empty-as in, as Milly says-
Milly: Oh no, my teddy bear's gone!
Jim (os): AHA! Caught you!
Jim, the-you guessed it-gym teacher, walks up behind them. He is a big man, rather muscular except for his... gu-*cough* er...'pofound rotundness'(which sometimes dissappears in early episodes ^^), and wears a red jacket, blue pants, a white headband over brown hair, and...a band-aid on his head for reasons unknown.
Jim: It's forbidden to play in the garden shed!
Cut to Milly and Tamiya. They look terrified. (Who wouldn't be?)
Milly: Wait a minute, Jim, it was my-
Jim: I don't wanna know why! I've told you a hundred times that this place is much too dangerous for children! Look at all these rusty tools!
Cut back. Milly tries to get a word in edgewise, but Jim ushers her away.
Jim: What do you think this is, a kids' playground?
He closes the door.
Milly (os): We know, but-
Jim (os): No 'buts', huh?
He locks the door to the shed, then turns to face the Duo of Doom.
Jim: Now I hope I've made myself real clear. ENTRY FORBIDDEN. ACCESS RESERVED FOR ADULTS.
Oooh, VERY WRONG thing to say in this situation and time, Jim. Now you've got Milly worked up.
Milly:(chocking back tears) With you, everything is off limits!
Jim: Now you listen here, huh?
He points at her. I think in early season one they were trying to emphasise that he was mean.[I]
Jim: I would change the way I talk if I were you, little girl.
[I]Oh no, Jim. You have just crossed a sacred line. Way to go.
Milly: LITTLE GIRL! Okay, I'm young, SO WHAT?! It's only big kids who can say what they think, huh?
Jim: Ah, so you think you're real big kids. Huh.
Okay, Jim's a teacher. Why is he just making the situation worse?...Hey, those are some pretty funky socks...two ACME socks. I can put them with my ACME Danny's TV and ACME Ghost King's mace.
Jim: Okay, that's fine. News report or not, the two of you are grounded for tonight in your room!
Cut to the duo. Milly's pigtails are sticking out funny.
Tamiya: Oh great Milly, really great. Thanks to you, it's goodbye Prom.
Back to Jim.
Jim: Now, BEAT IT!
Really, how mean can you get? Cut to the outside of Kadic's main grounds. Leaning against one of the building arches, Milly is crying again, and Tamiya is comforting her again.
Tamiya: Oh, look at the pictures we took. They're really fantastic.
From a distance, Odd walks over, carrying a stack of CDs bigger than his head. Closeup on the two.
Odd (os): Something wrong, Milly?
He walks to them with no such stack in sight.
Tamiya: Somebody stole her teddy bear.
Guess Odd is a 'big kid' they can trust. He crouches down to them. Milly looks up, angry.
Milly: And I'm sure it's one of the big kids who did it, for spite!
Tamiya looks at the pictures again. Her eyes widen.
Tamiya: Milly, you're right! Look at this!
Milly and Odd lean in closer to get a better view.
Tamiya: It's a picture of Sissi's room!
Cut to the picture. Wow, the room looks like a mess. Milly points to the pillow. We go closer, and see that the teddy is in fact under Sissi's pillow.
Milly (os): And there's my teddy bear, hidden under her pillow! Incredible!
Cut to Odd. He tries to lighten the situation.
Odd: Ah, who wouldv'e believed it? Soon, she'll be playing with dolls.
He laughs. But Milly wants to take this seriously.
Milly: Okay, c'mon now! We gotta find her!
Tamiya: If Jim catches us in the dorm, we're in big trouble, Milly.
Odd takes the picture from Tamiya, revealing the one of Sissi crying in her bathrobe.
Odd: You go back to your room. I'll handle this.
He smiles, gets up, and walks away. Milly and Tamiya look back at him lovingly. (Aww...)
Cut to some part of Kadic grounds with some building I'm assuming is the gym. Jim is trying to get in through two red doors. He hears something rustle, and turns around.
Jim: What's going on now? Who's there? C'mon out!
Okay Jim, whatever you say. A big shadow creeps over him. He makes a scared noise, then tries to challenge the big whatever-it-is.
Jim: Y-you better watch out! I-I'm a blackbelt!
Bluffing through his teeth, I bet. Anyway, whatever it is, it comes closer. He backs up against the doors. Spiral out on an overhead view of the building. A final scream...
Jim: AWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
...and silence.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART TWO
PART TWO
Commercial break ends. Fade in on a dorm hallway. Sissi is walking down the hall, Nicolas and Herb in tow. She puts a key in the lock of her dorm as the two uglies of doom just stare at her.
Sissi: Hey, I hope you two aren't going to follow me around all day long. As far as I know, you're not beautitions(can't figure that word out), so stop sticking to me like glue.
Meeean Sissi. She waves her hand in a I'm-so-much-better-dan-yuus fashion at them (up and down).
Sissi: I don't need you, understand, so scat!
'Scat'? Who SAYS that anymore? She enters her dorm. Herb and Nicolas just stare at each other, groaning. Then, Herb tries to talk to her. He puts his fingers together nervously.
Herb: Sissi, we... we thought-
Sissi leans out of her room angrily.
Sissi: Take this advice. Don't think, it doesn't suit you.
She slams the door in their faces. Herb and Nicolas just make some more them-esque noises. Cut to Sissi's room. She is leaning against the door, smiling as the boys are heard walking away. She brushes her hair out of her face with a cool attitude, and walks over to her bed. She sits down-cut to under the bed. More pervertation from XANA. Sissi kicks off her shoes.
Sissi: A bunch of babies at our prom.
She takes off her pants. Oooh, bad XANA, bad XANA...
Sissi: They've gotta be kidding.
Off of XANA-view, she presses a button on her stereo, starting some very rhythm-heavy music. She walks back across the room on XANA-vision again. Off again, she opens her closet. She has shed her shirt as well, don't worry kiddies, she's in a bra. Still...0o
Sissi: And that other freak who had the nerve to invite Ulrich-can't believe it.
She stands there, in her underwear, looking through her closet. Cut to the floor. Something pulls a sheet (?) away... Cut back. Sissi is throwing stuff out of her closet, including the pants she will wear later.
Sissi: If anybody's going out with Ulrich, It absolutely has to be me.
She sticks a white dress against herself, then throws it aside. She places a hand on her chest and pushes her hair aside again, for effect more than purpouse.
Sissi: I am the star, the diva of the school.
Okay, and she's telling herself this? Try harder, babe. On XANA-view once more, she walks away from the closet. The view seems to move towards a curtain. Meanwhile, Sissi sits down at a vanity, with all her various makeup stuffs she doesn't need. The view peeks through the curtain at her. (Eeeww...). She preens herself in the mirror. Back with XANA, we walk toward her trash can. Two loud thumps are heard. Sissi turns around, and lowers the volume of her music. She sees nothing. Actually, XANA has switched position to get a better look at her...o-kay. She makes faces in the mirror, probably practicing for flirting with Ulrich. (Speaking of him, where are our mains? This ep seems to focus on minor characters). She scratches her butt...puts on a pimple strip...something creeps from behind her...she removes the pimple strip...closer...she picks up some cucumbers...XANA is now directly above her. She puts the cucumbers on her eyes, along with her mud mask (oh, god, she's 12 for pete's sake). A few bottles rattle on the top shelf. Sissi whirls around, like a morning nightmare. Finally, some dialogue!
Sissi: Who's there? Answer me, who is it?
The bottles continue to rattle. She takes the cucumbers (my sis thought they were pickles) off her eyes as the bottles fall down, along with the rest of those shelves. She falls back, mud mask gone, as perfumes and powders fill the air, and caps roll past her. (Seriously...). She runs out of her room. In her underoos. Not the smartest thing to do.
Cut to the Kadic main building, and pan down. A crowd has gathered, and it grows fast. The door opens, and Mr. Delmas, the principal, and his daughter step out offscreen. Cut to them. Mr. Delmas, who we have not yet seen, is a gray-haired man in a brown suit. Sissi is standing with him, in a blue bathrobe, wearing her mud mask once again. She is crying into her sleeve.
Mr. Delmas: Move along, back to your dorms, everything is just fine.
He waves everyone on. Cut to Milly and Tamiya, who are in the crowd.
Milly: Looks as if we got ourselves a super scoop.
Tamiya takes a Polaroid picture. (Very interesting picture if you pause it right when the flash goes off.). Mr. Delmas leads Sissi away as the Lyokian Warriors Minus One (this is what I'll call them in Season 1) look on from under a nearby arch. FINALLY!
Odd: What do you say we take a look to make sure that our old friend XANA isn't behind this?
Yumi: Mmm hmm...
Now you can tell Odd's voice difference. It's almost worse than Jer's. His new voice fits him MUCH better. YEAH FOR GEZCEH! Cut to just outside Sissi's dorm. Ulrich leans against a wall, Odd is crouched down, and Yumi and Jeremie are standing up. The latter three are looking inside. The place looks like even more of a mess than before.
Ulrich: Whaddyou think?
Jeremie: A simple short circut. Too many appliances plugged in at the same time.
Closeup on Yumi.
Yumi: Yeah. Hi-fi, lights, lady shaver, curling iron, altogether, what do you expect to happen?
She flounces off.
Odd (os): Not to mention the Brain Stimulator.
He laughs as we pan across to J'Dawg. He looks thoughtfully into the room.
Odd (os): Although she probably never figured out how to use it.
Cut to a front view of Jeremie in all his bishonerd glory. ('Bishonerd' is my word for cartoon guys like Jeremie, Dib, etc. Cute nerds.). He walks away, still thinking.
Jeremie: Hmm...
From behind to door, Milly checks to see if Jeremie is gone, when confirmed, she and Tamiya stand in the doorway and take a picture of the scene...
Cut to the inside of the toolshed. Milly and Tamiya's voices are heard from the outside.
Milly (os): I dunno what happened, but if you ask me, Sissi had it coming.
The door opens, and Milly and Tamiya attempt to walk in.
Tamiya: I couldn't agree with you more.
They are both stopped cold by something. They gasp. The toolshed is empty-as in, as Milly says-
Milly: Oh no, my teddy bear's gone!
Jim (os): AHA! Caught you!
Jim, the-you guessed it-gym teacher, walks up behind them. He is a big man, rather muscular except for his... gu-*cough* er...'pofound rotundness'(which sometimes dissappears in early episodes ^^), and wears a red jacket, blue pants, a white headband over brown hair, and...a band-aid on his head for reasons unknown.
Jim: It's forbidden to play in the garden shed!
Cut to Milly and Tamiya. They look terrified. (Who wouldn't be?)
Milly: Wait a minute, Jim, it was my-
Jim: I don't wanna know why! I've told you a hundred times that this place is much too dangerous for children! Look at all these rusty tools!
Cut back. Milly tries to get a word in edgewise, but Jim ushers her away.
Jim: What do you think this is, a kids' playground?
He closes the door.
Milly (os): We know, but-
Jim (os): No 'buts', huh?
He locks the door to the shed, then turns to face the Duo of Doom.
Jim: Now I hope I've made myself real clear. ENTRY FORBIDDEN. ACCESS RESERVED FOR ADULTS.
Oooh, VERY WRONG thing to say in this situation and time, Jim. Now you've got Milly worked up.
Milly:(chocking back tears) With you, everything is off limits!
Jim: Now you listen here, huh?
He points at her. I think in early season one they were trying to emphasise that he was mean.[I]
Jim: I would change the way I talk if I were you, little girl.
[I]Oh no, Jim. You have just crossed a sacred line. Way to go.
Milly: LITTLE GIRL! Okay, I'm young, SO WHAT?! It's only big kids who can say what they think, huh?
Jim: Ah, so you think you're real big kids. Huh.
Okay, Jim's a teacher. Why is he just making the situation worse?...Hey, those are some pretty funky socks...two ACME socks. I can put them with my ACME Danny's TV and ACME Ghost King's mace.
Jim: Okay, that's fine. News report or not, the two of you are grounded for tonight in your room!
Cut to the duo. Milly's pigtails are sticking out funny.
Tamiya: Oh great Milly, really great. Thanks to you, it's goodbye Prom.
Back to Jim.
Jim: Now, BEAT IT!
Really, how mean can you get? Cut to the outside of Kadic's main grounds. Leaning against one of the building arches, Milly is crying again, and Tamiya is comforting her again.
Tamiya: Oh, look at the pictures we took. They're really fantastic.
From a distance, Odd walks over, carrying a stack of CDs bigger than his head. Closeup on the two.
Odd (os): Something wrong, Milly?
He walks to them with no such stack in sight.
Tamiya: Somebody stole her teddy bear.
Guess Odd is a 'big kid' they can trust. He crouches down to them. Milly looks up, angry.
Milly: And I'm sure it's one of the big kids who did it, for spite!
Tamiya looks at the pictures again. Her eyes widen.
Tamiya: Milly, you're right! Look at this!
Milly and Odd lean in closer to get a better view.
Tamiya: It's a picture of Sissi's room!
Cut to the picture. Wow, the room looks like a mess. Milly points to the pillow. We go closer, and see that the teddy is in fact under Sissi's pillow.
Milly (os): And there's my teddy bear, hidden under her pillow! Incredible!
Cut to Odd. He tries to lighten the situation.
Odd: Ah, who wouldv'e believed it? Soon, she'll be playing with dolls.
He laughs. But Milly wants to take this seriously.
Milly: Okay, c'mon now! We gotta find her!
Tamiya: If Jim catches us in the dorm, we're in big trouble, Milly.
Odd takes the picture from Tamiya, revealing the one of Sissi crying in her bathrobe.
Odd: You go back to your room. I'll handle this.
He smiles, gets up, and walks away. Milly and Tamiya look back at him lovingly. (Aww...)
Cut to some part of Kadic grounds with some building I'm assuming is the gym. Jim is trying to get in through two red doors. He hears something rustle, and turns around.
Jim: What's going on now? Who's there? C'mon out!
Okay Jim, whatever you say. A big shadow creeps over him. He makes a scared noise, then tries to challenge the big whatever-it-is.
Jim: Y-you better watch out! I-I'm a blackbelt!
Bluffing through his teeth, I bet. Anyway, whatever it is, it comes closer. He backs up against the doors. Spiral out on an overhead view of the building. A final scream...
Jim: AWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
...and silence.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART TWO
by ProjectSunrise » Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:29 pm
Mind if I help out? I've already done Part One of Seeing Is Believing, but I'll wait until you finish the final part of Teddygozilla. 
by Carth » Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:58 pm
Of course! Thank you so much. I actually have two parts to go, though.
Now I can take a bit of a break ^^
Now I can take a bit of a break ^^
by Carth » Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:35 pm
Here's part three!
PART THREE
Fade in again on Odd. He's in Sissi's room, looking at the photo. He looks up at the room.
Odd: Hm?
The room is still trashed, but there is no sign of Mr. Teddy-kins. He looks down at the photo again and puts his hands on his hips, thinking.
Cut to a situation that really gets me laughing. It's the Kadic Infirmary outside door.
Mr. Delmas (os): And now, you're sure, Jim, that-
Cut to the inside. Jim is in an infirmary bed, clutching his sheets and looking at Mr. Delmas with a worried explession.
Mr. Delmas (os): this is your attacker.
Jim: Muhmuhmuhmuhmuh.
He nods his head rapidly. Mr. Delmas holds a badly drawn picture of a bear (which should clue you in on the attacker) up to the camera.
Mr. Delmas: And you say he's an 'expert in martial arts'.
He pulls the paper down. Jim nods rapidly again. Cut to Delmas, who looks at the paper, confused.
Mr. Delmas: I think it would be better not to call the police, right Jim?
Jim just pulls the covers over his head, whimpering.
Cut back to the gym. The prom looks all set and ready to go. It's gonna be a fun, doomy night. Kinda. Cut to Jeremie, who is testing out the sound, I guess. He's wearing headphones.
Jeremie: What happened to Sissi, it was...it was kinda wierd, don't you think?
Cut to Ulrich, who is still taping.
Ulrich: It was a short circut. A simple short circut. What else could it be?
Cut to Yumi. She stares at some CD with what looks like disgust.
Jeremie (os): I'm not so sure, and you know just what I mean.
Yumi: Anyway, let's play it real cool. Walls have ears, y'know?
As if to drive the point home (I love that phrase), Herb and Nicolas walk right by, carrying some boxes. Ulrich watches them go. Yumi gets down from the table she was sitting on and stetches.
Yumi: Well, I've gotta go now and get ready for the prom tonight.
She turns around. I don't really like this angle of her.
Yumi: Sometimes being a day student can be a total drag.
You're telling me. She puts an arm in the air and smiles.
Ulrich (os): Don't complain. No one wakes you at 6 am, you have hot water, and you don't have to sleep next to smelly Odd.
I bet he would be quite smelly. Cut to the three again. Ulrich looks kinda grossed out. Yumi just waves and walks away. Jer waves after her, but Ulrich just stares at her.
Yumi: See ya later.
She walks out the door.
Cut back to the infirmary. Mr. Delmas closes the door, and turns around to see Odd in the hallway.
Mr. Delmas: Odd, uh...are you looking for something?
Odd: Oh, uh...no, you see, I just heard about what happened to Jim. Do they know who attacked him?
Cut back to Del-man. (Ooo, I'll call him that from now on!)
Mr. Delmas: Uh...no. For now, I think our gym teacher could use some rest.
Pan down. Del-man crumples up something in his hand and throws it in the nearest trash receptacle, after which walking away. Intrigued, Odd walks over and digs through the garbage until finding the paper. He uncrumples it, looks at it, and gasps-it's the teddy picture from earlier! I guess he peices it together, because next thing we know, we fade in on what looks like a twilight scene, with the same view of the paper.
Ulrich (os): XANA...in a teddy bear?
It is twilight. Odd, Ulrich and Jer are leaning against a pillar, contemplating this strange find.
Odd: Yeah, I'm pretty sure.
Cut to a better view. Jeremie holds his chin pensively.
Jeremie: He's always there when you least expect him.
Odd smells something...a trip to Lyoko! He sounds excited.
Odd: Okay guys, who goes and who stays here?
Cut to Jer. He lifts his big giant shmexeh head.
Jeremie: We can't have a solo mission, it's too dangerous without Yumi.
He lifts his hand and shakes his head.
Jeremie: If you go alone, you never know what you're gonna find over there.
Odd: I volunteer!
Odd puts up a finger and smiles, in a particularly famous scene. However, his finger drops and his look goes cynical at the next statement.
Jeremie (os): What did I just say, huh?
Odd: Well, have you got any other ideas?
Cut to Jer. Man, the early series was a bit wierd. Here, Jer's clueless and Odd's the voice of reason.
Odd (os): There have been two accidents. We can't leave the school unguarded.
Jeremie glances over, but looks kinda worried as well.
Odd (os): And even going back in time, if there's an accident-
Jeremie closes his eyes and scratches his head.
Odd (os): It's all over.
Cut back to the three. Jer puts his hand down. As he talks, Ulrich crumples the paper with the drawing on it, tosses it to have Odd catach it, and puts his arms on the two guys' shoulders.
Ulrich: Odd is right. You go, and I'll stay. If I find any clues I'll pass them on to you.
Cut to Ulrich.
Ulrich: Go on-and say hi to 'You-Know-Who' for me.
Jeremie: Mmm hmm...
Cut to Jeremie. He smiles and blushes. Aww...he so cute wen he embarassed ^^.
Yay, now for some cool Lyoko action stuff! Cut to...some place in the school. Odd and Jeremie open a red door and run through a tunnel... Now for the sequence we'll see a million times, with only slight variations. I'll transcript it each time anyway.
Now, we're at the sewers. Odd and Jer jump out through a hole in the wall and run towards a wall where three skateboards and a scooter are parked-proof that the four have been here before. Odd grabs a skateboard, while Jer gets the scooter. With a cool pink backdrop, Odd gets on the skateboard. Back at the sewers, Odd skates down some sort of path, with Jer behind him on the scooter. Their little trek ends at a grate, where a ladder is. They park at the ladder and go up. They come up at a sewer hole on some bridge, deep in the city. It is now night. At the end of the bridge is the infamous Renault factory-once used to make cars, now used to house the greatest technological advancement-and threat- since sliced bread, codename, XANA. They run across the bridge to some spare cables, which they swing across to get to ground level. Waiting is the infamous elevator. They get in and go down to the Control Room, where Jer gets off. Odd stays on, to get to the Scanner Level, where he is to enter Lyoko. Man, that elevator does a cool job of closing. Meanwile, in the control room, Jer gets in his cool chair and swings around the Holomap of Lyoko to the factory computer as Odd enters the scanner room. He stands in front of one of three scanners as Jeremie makes contact with Aelita. Wow, that was a big scene without dialogue.
Jeremie: Aelita? Aelita, Aelita, it's Jeremie, do you read me?
Apparently so. A little window pops up, and Aelita's face comes through.
Aelita: Hi there.
Cut back to Jeremie.
Jeremie: We think that XANA has launched an attack. Have you noticed anything?
Cut to Aelita. She shakes her head.
Aelita: No, nothing. But, we can take a closer look.
Cut to Jeremie. The infamous scanning process will begin in a bit.
Jeremie: Aelita, I'm sending Odd. He's coming over solo.
On the screen, Jer scrolls through player cards to find Odd's. He finds it.
Jeremie: Ulrich had to stay behind to watch for any virus action at school.
Odd's Lyoko form scans up onscreen.
Jeremie: Odd looks ready to go.
Cut to Ulrich. He is back at the school, communicating with Jeremie through a cellphone headset.
Jeremie (os): (from cell) How are things with you, Ulrich?
Ulrich: (into cell) It looks like we have a problem.
Overhead view. Ulrich is shining a flashlight on some footprints-some awfully big footprints. I mean, Ulrich is standing in one that's bigger than he is.
Ulrich: A big one.
Yay! Scanner time! Cut to Odd. He steps into a scanner. Somehow, this materialization seems a bit disorientated.
Jeremie (os): Transfer: Odd.
In the scanner, he does that little turnaround thing, after which the scanner closes. Jer presses a button on the supercomp.
Jeremie: Scanner.
Odd's hair does that flying up thing. The scanner analyzes him. His form scans up again...
Jeremie: Virtualization.
Odd's hair flies up as a white light blanks out the screen. He has been virtualized, taken to Lyoko. We go through the wires...aaaand....
WELCOME TO LYOKO
Odd's Lyoko form comes up in midar, loads awfully fast (it usually takes about ten seconds to load), and lands on the ground. He gets up.
Odd's Lyoko form could easily be said to imitate a cat. He has purple markings on his cheeks and oversized forehead, and is wearing a short purple shirt with...Kiwi (his dog) on it (?), shoulder length purple gloves with claws (which shoot laser arrows), a pink-orange shirt thing under the other one (think his real world outfit), and purple pant-things with purple boots with yellow tops. Yep, he likes purple. He also has one quite distinctive feature on Lyoko-a tail. It's purple. Bet you guessed that.
Over by a big hole in the ground, Odd sees Aelita waving. He runs over to her. Cut to Ulrich. He's speaking into his cell as he surveys wreckage that the XANABear has done.
Ulrich: Jeremie-It's bad, huh? The bear got out of the school.
Ehh...kay. That line didn't make sense to me. Cut to Aelita on the Matrix background-she is speaking to Jeremie.
Aelita: If it's under XANA's control, it'll only become much madder.
Cut to Jeremie. He listens to her with a stern face.
Aelita (os): It'll go for anybody that's around, especially-
Cut back to her. Yay, random meaningless destruction! That's how I like mah destructin.
Aelita: -His mortal enemies.
Back to Jer.
Aelita (os): Like you.
Jeremie's mouth drops open in realization.
Jeremie: Huh?
This comes as a shock to Ulrich, who has been listening through the cell, as well. He remembers something-Yumi doesn't know!
Ulrich: Oh, Yumi!
He runs at top speed towards her house, panting heavily. (What IS it with panting in this cartoon? They seem to do it, a lot and unneccessarily.)
Back in Lyoko, Aelita and Odd are standing at the edge of the hole.
Aelita: You see that? The tower that XANA has activated can't be too far away.
We look down the hole. There's...nothing really there. Cut up to Odd and Aelita. Odd crouches to have a better look.
Odd: Well, uh...not down there, anyway.
Hey, while we have a good view, I'll describe Aelita's outfit! She has on a pink, short sleeved vest-thing with a grayish-green shirt underneath, a pink skirt with lighter-pink trim, grayish-green arm warmers (?), and grayish-green leggings, with pink wrappings and pink shoe-things. Yeah. A lot cooler than described.
Aelita turns around and stretches out her arm.
Aelita: Maybe on the neighboring plateaus.
Odd turns around, still crouching, and sees something bad.
Odd: Mmm...Oops...uh, too late. Here come the reception comittee.
Pull back, and...kicking up a sandstorm, here they are! The great! The mighty! The...Kankrelats. Or Roachsters, as they were called back then. They're monsters of XANA-drones sent out to stop Aelita and co. These are like the drones of the drones-the weakest, and smallest trouble-though they can do some serious damage, and have been known to kill. They have large, broad, bent brown 'heads', four spindly grey 'legs' directly under the head, what looks like a stinger on the back of the 'head', a laser shooter as a 'mouth', and an 'eye' on their 'forehead'-the Eye of XANA. When hit here, the monster is destroyed immediately. They are very fast, and scuttle toward our heroes at top speed. Sorry bout these long descriptions, it's the first ep, what can I say. Even though later they are not considered much of a threat-what with Mr. Scypheh and all-at this point, Aelita seems shocked. Odd hisses at them. The creatures-five of them-surround the crew o' two. Cut back to Jer, who is witnessing all this on his screen.
Jeremie: Odd, take good care of Aelita.
The beeper beeps...cut to outside. Another thing beeps...the ringing of a phone when you're trying to call someone. Ulrich is running down a street past some overturned cars and a bent lightpost, calling Yumi as he walks, hoping, praying that she will answer the phone.
Ulrich: Answer...will you answer...
Cut to Yumi's house, then the halls, then the bathroom. The ringing phone is in a pile of clothes. Inside a steaming shower/bath stall (that's one nice bath...yay! An ACME Yumi's bathtub!), Yumi hears the cellphone ring. Her head comes up from under the water.
Back at the factory, Jer is confused.
Jeremie: Odd, what's going on?
In Lyoko, the Kankrelats are firing lasers at the crew. Odd masterfully dodges many lasers, counteracting with one of his own.
Odd: Laser arrows!
He puts his hand on one of his gloves to steady it, and does something that makes an arrow fly out of the glove-a Laser Arrow, duh. It hits one Kank and shoots it ded. To escape the shootout, Aelita runs down a footpath that spirals down the hole. Behind her, Odd is shot down, but not devirtualized. On Jer's screen, we see the infamous 'Odd-is-hit-in-the-chest-oh-noes' screen.
Jeremie (os): Odd! You just lost another 10 life points!
Odd (os): No kidding!
And here it is, the magical confusing life points. I won't even bother trying to trace all the inaccuracies, there are too many, even in Season 2. Back to Lyoko we go- Odd goes down the footpath to escape the Kanks, and crouches behind a low wall. From further down, Aelita beckons to him.
Aelita: Odd! I'm afraid we haven't any choice.
She stretches her hand towards the path. Odd looks...and...
Yay! Did I mention something? Odd has a special power in Lyoko-the Clarivoyance of Doom, and you're seeing it folks! This is a rare moment, as Odd has only had visions (he cannot control the power) twice in the entire show. (I think it was written out, and replaced by his Shield ability). In the vision, he sees Aelita, falling into the endless abyss below them, screaming. Back in the real world, a Kank fires a laser, which hits Odd and blows him back. He gets up, unfazed, and follows Aelita. Meanwhile, on Earth, Ulrich rings the Ishiyamas' doorbell. Yumi hears the doorbell, and steps out of the tub. She wraps a towel around herself. He rings the doorbell twice more. Yumi runs down the stairs, fully dressed in her prom outfit-a tank-top version of her regular shirt with black arm socks, a reddish skirt, reddish striped knee socks and her regular shoes. Overall, really cool outfit. She opens the door.
Yumi: Ulrich.
Ulrich runs inside without warning.
Yumi: Watch it, will you?
He turns around and grabs her hands.
Ulrich: Sorry. Are your parents home?
Yumi: No, they went out.
Ulrich: Okay.
He pulls her out the door. Wow, he's short compared to her.
Ulrich: C'mon. We can't stay here.
About one foot out the door, Yumi pulls herself out of Ulrich's grasp and backs up.
Yumi: Hey! Would you mind explaining?
BOOM. BOOM. Yumi looks behind herself, and gasps at what she sees.
Ulrich: We don't have time. C'mon!
He grabs her again. They run away from the house as...
Milly's teddy bear comes after them. Except now, it's grown about fifty feet, and breaks the street apart with every step. It groans as it steps.
In Lyoko, the four Kanks chase Aelita and Odd as they continue to run. Odd looks behind himself. Cut to Jeremie's view. Four red points-the Kanks-are following two green points-our hereoes.
Jeremie (os): Odd, be careful. You only have 50 life points left!
Back in Lyoko again, Odd turns around to face down these nasty buggers.
Odd: Laser arrows!
He fires two-one from each hand. They both hit, narrowing the Kanks to two. He fires another, which hits. The remaining Kankrelat is blown off the edge. In turn, Aelita, one path below, is blown off the edge by the falling Kank. Odd turns around to see her fall-like in his vision. Thinking fast, he jumps down from the platform, grabs Aelita, and scraches his left claw against the stone, holding the two of them there. Odd looks up to see if the claws held, and sighs in relief. He looks down at Aelita.
Odd: Ah, we can't leave you alone for one second, huh?
Pushing that joke aside, Aelita sees a hole in the wall next to her. Cut to the inside of the hole. It's a sort of tunnel, with pulsating XANA-roots running through it.
Aelita: Odd...I think I found something.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART THREE
PART THREE
Fade in again on Odd. He's in Sissi's room, looking at the photo. He looks up at the room.
Odd: Hm?
The room is still trashed, but there is no sign of Mr. Teddy-kins. He looks down at the photo again and puts his hands on his hips, thinking.
Cut to a situation that really gets me laughing. It's the Kadic Infirmary outside door.
Mr. Delmas (os): And now, you're sure, Jim, that-
Cut to the inside. Jim is in an infirmary bed, clutching his sheets and looking at Mr. Delmas with a worried explession.
Mr. Delmas (os): this is your attacker.
Jim: Muhmuhmuhmuhmuh.
He nods his head rapidly. Mr. Delmas holds a badly drawn picture of a bear (which should clue you in on the attacker) up to the camera.
Mr. Delmas: And you say he's an 'expert in martial arts'.
He pulls the paper down. Jim nods rapidly again. Cut to Delmas, who looks at the paper, confused.
Mr. Delmas: I think it would be better not to call the police, right Jim?
Jim just pulls the covers over his head, whimpering.
Cut back to the gym. The prom looks all set and ready to go. It's gonna be a fun, doomy night. Kinda. Cut to Jeremie, who is testing out the sound, I guess. He's wearing headphones.
Jeremie: What happened to Sissi, it was...it was kinda wierd, don't you think?
Cut to Ulrich, who is still taping.
Ulrich: It was a short circut. A simple short circut. What else could it be?
Cut to Yumi. She stares at some CD with what looks like disgust.
Jeremie (os): I'm not so sure, and you know just what I mean.
Yumi: Anyway, let's play it real cool. Walls have ears, y'know?
As if to drive the point home (I love that phrase), Herb and Nicolas walk right by, carrying some boxes. Ulrich watches them go. Yumi gets down from the table she was sitting on and stetches.
Yumi: Well, I've gotta go now and get ready for the prom tonight.
She turns around. I don't really like this angle of her.
Yumi: Sometimes being a day student can be a total drag.
You're telling me. She puts an arm in the air and smiles.
Ulrich (os): Don't complain. No one wakes you at 6 am, you have hot water, and you don't have to sleep next to smelly Odd.
I bet he would be quite smelly. Cut to the three again. Ulrich looks kinda grossed out. Yumi just waves and walks away. Jer waves after her, but Ulrich just stares at her.
Yumi: See ya later.
She walks out the door.
Cut back to the infirmary. Mr. Delmas closes the door, and turns around to see Odd in the hallway.
Mr. Delmas: Odd, uh...are you looking for something?
Odd: Oh, uh...no, you see, I just heard about what happened to Jim. Do they know who attacked him?
Cut back to Del-man. (Ooo, I'll call him that from now on!)
Mr. Delmas: Uh...no. For now, I think our gym teacher could use some rest.
Pan down. Del-man crumples up something in his hand and throws it in the nearest trash receptacle, after which walking away. Intrigued, Odd walks over and digs through the garbage until finding the paper. He uncrumples it, looks at it, and gasps-it's the teddy picture from earlier! I guess he peices it together, because next thing we know, we fade in on what looks like a twilight scene, with the same view of the paper.
Ulrich (os): XANA...in a teddy bear?
It is twilight. Odd, Ulrich and Jer are leaning against a pillar, contemplating this strange find.
Odd: Yeah, I'm pretty sure.
Cut to a better view. Jeremie holds his chin pensively.
Jeremie: He's always there when you least expect him.
Odd smells something...a trip to Lyoko! He sounds excited.
Odd: Okay guys, who goes and who stays here?
Cut to Jer. He lifts his big giant shmexeh head.
Jeremie: We can't have a solo mission, it's too dangerous without Yumi.
He lifts his hand and shakes his head.
Jeremie: If you go alone, you never know what you're gonna find over there.
Odd: I volunteer!
Odd puts up a finger and smiles, in a particularly famous scene. However, his finger drops and his look goes cynical at the next statement.
Jeremie (os): What did I just say, huh?
Odd: Well, have you got any other ideas?
Cut to Jer. Man, the early series was a bit wierd. Here, Jer's clueless and Odd's the voice of reason.
Odd (os): There have been two accidents. We can't leave the school unguarded.
Jeremie glances over, but looks kinda worried as well.
Odd (os): And even going back in time, if there's an accident-
Jeremie closes his eyes and scratches his head.
Odd (os): It's all over.
Cut back to the three. Jer puts his hand down. As he talks, Ulrich crumples the paper with the drawing on it, tosses it to have Odd catach it, and puts his arms on the two guys' shoulders.
Ulrich: Odd is right. You go, and I'll stay. If I find any clues I'll pass them on to you.
Cut to Ulrich.
Ulrich: Go on-and say hi to 'You-Know-Who' for me.
Jeremie: Mmm hmm...
Cut to Jeremie. He smiles and blushes. Aww...he so cute wen he embarassed ^^.
Yay, now for some cool Lyoko action stuff! Cut to...some place in the school. Odd and Jeremie open a red door and run through a tunnel... Now for the sequence we'll see a million times, with only slight variations. I'll transcript it each time anyway.
Now, we're at the sewers. Odd and Jer jump out through a hole in the wall and run towards a wall where three skateboards and a scooter are parked-proof that the four have been here before. Odd grabs a skateboard, while Jer gets the scooter. With a cool pink backdrop, Odd gets on the skateboard. Back at the sewers, Odd skates down some sort of path, with Jer behind him on the scooter. Their little trek ends at a grate, where a ladder is. They park at the ladder and go up. They come up at a sewer hole on some bridge, deep in the city. It is now night. At the end of the bridge is the infamous Renault factory-once used to make cars, now used to house the greatest technological advancement-and threat- since sliced bread, codename, XANA. They run across the bridge to some spare cables, which they swing across to get to ground level. Waiting is the infamous elevator. They get in and go down to the Control Room, where Jer gets off. Odd stays on, to get to the Scanner Level, where he is to enter Lyoko. Man, that elevator does a cool job of closing. Meanwile, in the control room, Jer gets in his cool chair and swings around the Holomap of Lyoko to the factory computer as Odd enters the scanner room. He stands in front of one of three scanners as Jeremie makes contact with Aelita. Wow, that was a big scene without dialogue.
Jeremie: Aelita? Aelita, Aelita, it's Jeremie, do you read me?
Apparently so. A little window pops up, and Aelita's face comes through.
Aelita: Hi there.
Cut back to Jeremie.
Jeremie: We think that XANA has launched an attack. Have you noticed anything?
Cut to Aelita. She shakes her head.
Aelita: No, nothing. But, we can take a closer look.
Cut to Jeremie. The infamous scanning process will begin in a bit.
Jeremie: Aelita, I'm sending Odd. He's coming over solo.
On the screen, Jer scrolls through player cards to find Odd's. He finds it.
Jeremie: Ulrich had to stay behind to watch for any virus action at school.
Odd's Lyoko form scans up onscreen.
Jeremie: Odd looks ready to go.
Cut to Ulrich. He is back at the school, communicating with Jeremie through a cellphone headset.
Jeremie (os): (from cell) How are things with you, Ulrich?
Ulrich: (into cell) It looks like we have a problem.
Overhead view. Ulrich is shining a flashlight on some footprints-some awfully big footprints. I mean, Ulrich is standing in one that's bigger than he is.
Ulrich: A big one.
Yay! Scanner time! Cut to Odd. He steps into a scanner. Somehow, this materialization seems a bit disorientated.
Jeremie (os): Transfer: Odd.
In the scanner, he does that little turnaround thing, after which the scanner closes. Jer presses a button on the supercomp.
Jeremie: Scanner.
Odd's hair does that flying up thing. The scanner analyzes him. His form scans up again...
Jeremie: Virtualization.
Odd's hair flies up as a white light blanks out the screen. He has been virtualized, taken to Lyoko. We go through the wires...aaaand....
WELCOME TO LYOKO
Odd's Lyoko form comes up in midar, loads awfully fast (it usually takes about ten seconds to load), and lands on the ground. He gets up.
Odd's Lyoko form could easily be said to imitate a cat. He has purple markings on his cheeks and oversized forehead, and is wearing a short purple shirt with...Kiwi (his dog) on it (?), shoulder length purple gloves with claws (which shoot laser arrows), a pink-orange shirt thing under the other one (think his real world outfit), and purple pant-things with purple boots with yellow tops. Yep, he likes purple. He also has one quite distinctive feature on Lyoko-a tail. It's purple. Bet you guessed that.
Over by a big hole in the ground, Odd sees Aelita waving. He runs over to her. Cut to Ulrich. He's speaking into his cell as he surveys wreckage that the XANABear has done.
Ulrich: Jeremie-It's bad, huh? The bear got out of the school.
Ehh...kay. That line didn't make sense to me. Cut to Aelita on the Matrix background-she is speaking to Jeremie.
Aelita: If it's under XANA's control, it'll only become much madder.
Cut to Jeremie. He listens to her with a stern face.
Aelita (os): It'll go for anybody that's around, especially-
Cut back to her. Yay, random meaningless destruction! That's how I like mah destructin.
Aelita: -His mortal enemies.
Back to Jer.
Aelita (os): Like you.
Jeremie's mouth drops open in realization.
Jeremie: Huh?
This comes as a shock to Ulrich, who has been listening through the cell, as well. He remembers something-Yumi doesn't know!
Ulrich: Oh, Yumi!
He runs at top speed towards her house, panting heavily. (What IS it with panting in this cartoon? They seem to do it, a lot and unneccessarily.)
Back in Lyoko, Aelita and Odd are standing at the edge of the hole.
Aelita: You see that? The tower that XANA has activated can't be too far away.
We look down the hole. There's...nothing really there. Cut up to Odd and Aelita. Odd crouches to have a better look.
Odd: Well, uh...not down there, anyway.
Hey, while we have a good view, I'll describe Aelita's outfit! She has on a pink, short sleeved vest-thing with a grayish-green shirt underneath, a pink skirt with lighter-pink trim, grayish-green arm warmers (?), and grayish-green leggings, with pink wrappings and pink shoe-things. Yeah. A lot cooler than described.
Aelita turns around and stretches out her arm.
Aelita: Maybe on the neighboring plateaus.
Odd turns around, still crouching, and sees something bad.
Odd: Mmm...Oops...uh, too late. Here come the reception comittee.
Pull back, and...kicking up a sandstorm, here they are! The great! The mighty! The...Kankrelats. Or Roachsters, as they were called back then. They're monsters of XANA-drones sent out to stop Aelita and co. These are like the drones of the drones-the weakest, and smallest trouble-though they can do some serious damage, and have been known to kill. They have large, broad, bent brown 'heads', four spindly grey 'legs' directly under the head, what looks like a stinger on the back of the 'head', a laser shooter as a 'mouth', and an 'eye' on their 'forehead'-the Eye of XANA. When hit here, the monster is destroyed immediately. They are very fast, and scuttle toward our heroes at top speed. Sorry bout these long descriptions, it's the first ep, what can I say. Even though later they are not considered much of a threat-what with Mr. Scypheh and all-at this point, Aelita seems shocked. Odd hisses at them. The creatures-five of them-surround the crew o' two. Cut back to Jer, who is witnessing all this on his screen.
Jeremie: Odd, take good care of Aelita.
The beeper beeps...cut to outside. Another thing beeps...the ringing of a phone when you're trying to call someone. Ulrich is running down a street past some overturned cars and a bent lightpost, calling Yumi as he walks, hoping, praying that she will answer the phone.
Ulrich: Answer...will you answer...
Cut to Yumi's house, then the halls, then the bathroom. The ringing phone is in a pile of clothes. Inside a steaming shower/bath stall (that's one nice bath...yay! An ACME Yumi's bathtub!), Yumi hears the cellphone ring. Her head comes up from under the water.
Back at the factory, Jer is confused.
Jeremie: Odd, what's going on?
In Lyoko, the Kankrelats are firing lasers at the crew. Odd masterfully dodges many lasers, counteracting with one of his own.
Odd: Laser arrows!
He puts his hand on one of his gloves to steady it, and does something that makes an arrow fly out of the glove-a Laser Arrow, duh. It hits one Kank and shoots it ded. To escape the shootout, Aelita runs down a footpath that spirals down the hole. Behind her, Odd is shot down, but not devirtualized. On Jer's screen, we see the infamous 'Odd-is-hit-in-the-chest-oh-noes' screen.
Jeremie (os): Odd! You just lost another 10 life points!
Odd (os): No kidding!
And here it is, the magical confusing life points. I won't even bother trying to trace all the inaccuracies, there are too many, even in Season 2. Back to Lyoko we go- Odd goes down the footpath to escape the Kanks, and crouches behind a low wall. From further down, Aelita beckons to him.
Aelita: Odd! I'm afraid we haven't any choice.
She stretches her hand towards the path. Odd looks...and...
Yay! Did I mention something? Odd has a special power in Lyoko-the Clarivoyance of Doom, and you're seeing it folks! This is a rare moment, as Odd has only had visions (he cannot control the power) twice in the entire show. (I think it was written out, and replaced by his Shield ability). In the vision, he sees Aelita, falling into the endless abyss below them, screaming. Back in the real world, a Kank fires a laser, which hits Odd and blows him back. He gets up, unfazed, and follows Aelita. Meanwhile, on Earth, Ulrich rings the Ishiyamas' doorbell. Yumi hears the doorbell, and steps out of the tub. She wraps a towel around herself. He rings the doorbell twice more. Yumi runs down the stairs, fully dressed in her prom outfit-a tank-top version of her regular shirt with black arm socks, a reddish skirt, reddish striped knee socks and her regular shoes. Overall, really cool outfit. She opens the door.
Yumi: Ulrich.
Ulrich runs inside without warning.
Yumi: Watch it, will you?
He turns around and grabs her hands.
Ulrich: Sorry. Are your parents home?
Yumi: No, they went out.
Ulrich: Okay.
He pulls her out the door. Wow, he's short compared to her.
Ulrich: C'mon. We can't stay here.
About one foot out the door, Yumi pulls herself out of Ulrich's grasp and backs up.
Yumi: Hey! Would you mind explaining?
BOOM. BOOM. Yumi looks behind herself, and gasps at what she sees.
Ulrich: We don't have time. C'mon!
He grabs her again. They run away from the house as...
Milly's teddy bear comes after them. Except now, it's grown about fifty feet, and breaks the street apart with every step. It groans as it steps.
In Lyoko, the four Kanks chase Aelita and Odd as they continue to run. Odd looks behind himself. Cut to Jeremie's view. Four red points-the Kanks-are following two green points-our hereoes.
Jeremie (os): Odd, be careful. You only have 50 life points left!
Back in Lyoko again, Odd turns around to face down these nasty buggers.
Odd: Laser arrows!
He fires two-one from each hand. They both hit, narrowing the Kanks to two. He fires another, which hits. The remaining Kankrelat is blown off the edge. In turn, Aelita, one path below, is blown off the edge by the falling Kank. Odd turns around to see her fall-like in his vision. Thinking fast, he jumps down from the platform, grabs Aelita, and scraches his left claw against the stone, holding the two of them there. Odd looks up to see if the claws held, and sighs in relief. He looks down at Aelita.
Odd: Ah, we can't leave you alone for one second, huh?
Pushing that joke aside, Aelita sees a hole in the wall next to her. Cut to the inside of the hole. It's a sort of tunnel, with pulsating XANA-roots running through it.
Aelita: Odd...I think I found something.
Cut to commercial.
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END OF PART THREE
by Carth » Thu Dec 22, 2005 1:15 pm
Oooh...sorry bout the wait, folks! I'm beginning Part IV now. It'll be here by at least New Year's.
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