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Episode Idea: Suspended

Postby Reesane » Tue Dec 27, 2005 8:40 am

Episode Idea: Suspended

This is an idea I have had for awhile now, so enjoy.

Jeremie is caught sneaking out to the factory, and is suspended. The next day, Jeremie’s Dad comes to pick him up from school. Jeremie notices his dad giving him a funny look, but he thinks it has to do with his suspension. A few minuets after they drive off, a police car pulls up with the Real Jeremie’s dad. As it turns out, some one or something has attack Jeremie’s dad on his way and stolen his car. The Lyoko gangs realize that XAXA has kidnapped Jeremie right in front of them. Mean while, Jeremie begins to notice something is amiss when they pull off the main road into a back one, where another car is waiting. Jeremie then realizes what has happened, only to be attacked by a hidden specter. The specter wraps around him like a striate jacket. Jeremie is then roughly shoved into the back seat of the second car. When Jeremie wakes up, he is being dragged out of the car and into an abandoned factory out in the middle of nowhere. Once XANA has locked Jeremie inside on of the janitor’s closets, XANA calls the rest of the gang: Surrender 11pm tomorrow or I assimilate Jeremie*.

* Permanent possession (Or maybe I should replace that with using Jeremie as a guinipig? [sp])

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Postby Taelia » Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:53 am

It's a great idea. =D What would his dad look like? Would he meet Aelita?
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Postby Reesane » Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:02 am

Thanks.

Also, for anyone who thinks this has already been done, its XANA taking the original idea and taking it one step further. In this case, Its a win-win scenario for XANA, Because if they do give in, XANA wins, and if they don't XANA gets a loyle servent(Brainwashed/Possessed Jeremie).
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Postby Taelia » Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:27 am

How will they surrender?
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Postby Reesane » Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:30 am

A) The trough themselves off a clif.
B) They report to the scaners to be Infused with a perminet virus, and become loyle servents to XANA.
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Postby Taelia » Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:58 am

AHHHHH!!
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Postby Reesane » Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:28 am

Is my spelling that bad?

Any way:

Aileta, Ulrick and Yumi get ot of this mess fine, but Odd and jeremie get possesed by XANA. Odd does something foolish and recless. Because Jeremie's dad's car's (hehehe) parts where found in the factory, odd asums that Jeremie is on lyoko and vurtualizes himself. this is exatly what XANA was waiting for. A polymophic specter moddefys the scaners so that if someone is matiralized, they are put under XANA's control (and don't say its imposible for XANA to due so, I belive that if they still retain some free will, than there will be no problems for XANA.). And knowing odd, this is exatly what happens. XANA sends a van to pick odd up... And the deadline runs out.

So XANA has a gard and a scientist at his disposil (Don't worry, The remaining gang will find a way to fix this.).
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Postby Star Way » Tue Dec 27, 2005 12:39 pm

Reesane wrote:Is my spelling that bad?

Any way:

Aileta, Ulrick and Yumi get ot of this mess fine, but Odd and jeremie get possesed by XANA. Odd does something foolish and recless. Because Jeremie's dad's car's (hehehe) parts where found in the factory, odd asums that Jeremie is on lyoko and vurtualizes himself. this is exatly what XANA was waiting for. A polymophic specter moddefys the scaners so that if someone is matiralized, they are put under XANA's control (and don't say its imposible for XANA to due so, I belive that if they still retain some free will, than there will be no problems for XANA.). And knowing odd, this is exatly what happens. XANA sends a van to pick odd up... And the deadline runs out.

So XANA has a gard and a scientist at his disposil (Don't worry, The remaining gang will find a way to fix this.).


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Postby psyt » Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:38 pm

it sounds like a good episode idea, but i mean, has an episode ever taken place outside of the campus, factory, or between campus/factory.

alright exclude like the airport from holiday in the fog and stuff >.>,

yeah i dont know why i brought that up, sounds like a great episode idea, just had trouble imagining it for that reason. Look forward to seeing it in season three... cause moonscoop obviosly going to steal it...
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Postby alexjames83 » Wed Dec 28, 2005 12:04 am

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Postby Reesane » Wed Dec 28, 2005 8:09 am

Star Way wrote:No, it's not that bad, but you may wish to learn the actual spellings of their names...


Sorry, I'm Very Very Very bad with names.
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Postby KuroKarasu » Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:00 pm

Awsome episode idea, u should write a story about it. OO!! Can I? I'll give all credit 2 u!!!
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