




Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:14 AM Title: Poems
nice, what if ulrich finds the scrapbook, that would be......... like when he found her diary i guess





Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:13 AM Title: Poems
wow, ulrich and his writer block awesome




Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:11 AM Title: Heart Broken
great, the nurse just said kiddies,right lol please finish its great so far





Date: Jan 31, 2008 12:48 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
yayayayayayay, aelitas alive, uxy is stil on and odd is sti good ole odd, perfect story, perfect score





Date: Jan 31, 2008 12:02 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
ahhhshe smiled, nut why, why did yumi and ulrich broke up, i guess illjust ahve to read on, ohh wel, thanks heaps, kiw, im adding you to my favs





Date: Jan 30, 2008 03:00 AM Title: Years Go on
ahhhhh, no aelita, dont believe kim, jer bear looooves you





Date: Dec 24, 2007 03:01 AM Title: Heart Broken
One word: WOW!!!!!
ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
Date: Jul 22, 2007 01:02 AM Title: Heart Broken
You should update this, homes, this is a great story.





Date: Jul 10, 2007 06:41 PM Title: Years Go on
I don't mean to be pushy, I just want to know if you would let me add this fic to my new website, freewebs.com/everstray, I wont take credit for it I promise. But if you don't want me to add it, just say so. I wont add it until you responed.




Date: May 19, 2007 11:58 AM Title: Heart Broken
OMG! SO awesome! PLEASE update! Lol... 'now all we need is a lightning bolt to strike a character'... great story!
Date: Apr 10, 2007 04:12 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
That was so good! You should get an award or something for it.(if i had one i'd send it in the mail) I don't like Jason all that much though, but I'm a BIG AelitaxJeremie fan.




Date: Apr 08, 2007 07:36 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
That was really good. I would say, one of your best stories.




Date: Feb 14, 2007 07:11 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
Get to the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!





Date: Dec 13, 2006 10:14 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?
Awesome chapter I'll have to read the second one when you finish.





Date: Nov 30, 2006 05:22 PM Title: Poems
I love YxU !! Awesome!





Date: Nov 17, 2006 02:19 PM Title: Years Go on
Jeremie and Aelita forever! Make the two togehter again!
Author's Response: I just may..



Date: Nov 13, 2006 02:16 PM Title: Years Go on
Wow, I just love the twists and turns your story takes! The cliff hangers of the relationship of JA always changing, looks good! I can only hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I feel so bad I didn't update in almost a month or over..I forget.. XD




Date: Oct 03, 2006 07:42 AM Title: Years Go on
good job so far, i personaly think that you have Aelita a little too outgoing. But that is probibly just me, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, and please excuse it, because I don't really know how to play Aelita really well...





Date: Oct 02, 2006 04:13 PM Title: Years Go on
I'm liking it so far...
The only thing I'd watch out for is using another word that sounds the same as the word you're really thinking of, like "your" instead of "you're" when you mean "you are." It's a mistake I've seen in a lot of fanfics; and it's something a spell checker will not necessarily catch.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Super great!!! I'll check or it in the future!! Thanks for da help!