Date: Nov 06, 2006 04:16 PM Title: Alone?
Well written, insightful. Very good and a nice setting. Although, for it's sudden-ness and a few other things I gave it a five. Keep working. ^.~ v
Thanks for the review, and your advice...I guess I'll try to make it less sudden next time.
Date: Nov 06, 2006 02:12 PM Title: Alone?
Well that was interesting, you put things in a way that most people dont realy see. Most people see jeremie and Yumi as a Brother~Sister relationship. But it would be one to suspect them to turn to the last person that they realy know in that situation. Good job. 8/10