Penname: Gravity Control [Contact] Real name: Brianna
Member Since: Nov 05, 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hello, world...this is my profile. Thanks for reading!

There's not a lot to say about me. I like fluff, mysteries, techno/trance/house music, and I'm virtually obsessed with J/Y.

And I completely despise all canon pairings! All of them! That means U/Y, J/A, and O/SK!

Oh, I also like randomness. (Ammina Limewake!) In fact, you have to go listen to the Gabriel and Dresden remix of "Beautiful Things" by Andain right now! It's the coolest trance song ever!

Out of Hillary Clinton, Al Gore, Rudolph Giuiliani, and Morak Obama (that's my nickname for him), I am definitely for either Giuiliani or Gore. You couldn't pay me to vote for a Muslim or a Clinton. If Obama wins the election, we might as well wave the white flag. If Clinton wins, we have to live in our cellars.


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Gender: female
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Reviews by Gravity Control
Summary: The line between darkness and light is but a thin line. And a member of the lyoko gang is going to learn just how thin that line really is.
Categories: Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 563 Read Count: 2799
Published: Sep 02, 2006 Updated: Sep 02, 2006
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A rope in one hand, a string in the other

Short chap but very cool! Really opens it up. Can't wait for updates but I will if necessary! 8/10 so far.

Summary: One of Odd's random whims leads his friends into a journey they probably won't ever forget.
Categories: Seasons, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No Word count: 5635 Read Count: 15313
Published: Sep 02, 2006 Updated: Sep 04, 2006
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: The Result

Odorokubeki!!! This is easily one of the greatest fanfics I've ever read! Has a great style, everything is strung together perfectly, and it sticks to the true CL spirit! 10 out of 10! Looking forward to the next chapter...

Summary: What did our heros do before they knew about lyoko, How'd their life go?
Categories: Seasons > Pre-Season 1 Characters: Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: What if?
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: Yes Word count: 2202 Read Count: 11166
Published: Oct 03, 2006 Updated: Jan 04, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstar
Date: May 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Yumi

Well, that fic was both interesting and entertaining. You could have been a bit more specific about who was talking, and I didn't completely understand the end of Chapter 4, but overall I think it was good. Keep it up! 6/10.

Summary:

This is how Ulrich and yumi broke up


Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 107 Read Count: 1391
Published: Oct 05, 2006 Updated: Oct 05, 2006
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, this is sad! Even though I dislike U/Y, this is very well-written. A bit short, but that's okay.

Summary:

They hurted Odd's feelings and let him come to the cafeteria.But there's more adventures than this!


Categories: Ships > Jeremie and Yumi Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: Yes Word count: 1059 Read Count: 61305
Published: Oct 11, 2006 Updated: May 17, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Jeremy's family and Ulrich visit the United States

This story is a bit weird, I mean, since when did Sissi become chums with the group? And the donut thing? No matter. For some reason I can't stop reading this. I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary: Sequel to "The New Girl" and second in series "To Understand." Odd finds he has feelings for the new girl, and Jeremie is torn between Aelita and Kaitie. Ulrich tries to bring Yumi back to him as she tries to ignore his protests. The team is falling apart, and only one person can bring it back together.
Categories: Ships, Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Ships > Odd and Aelita, Ships > Other, Seasons > Season 3, Ships > Jeremie and Yumi Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: To Understand
Chapters: 8
Completed: Yes Word count: 1707 Read Count: 27043
Published: Oct 28, 2006 Updated: Jan 27, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Feb 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Mistake

Hmm, intriguing series! When I first saw this I thought to myself, "Great, I just know where this is going; Kaitie's another Mary-Sue." Turns out I was wrong! I voted 9 out of 10!!

P.S. So...just out of curiosity...who does Jeremie end up with? Aelita or Kaitie? *secretly hopes it's Yumi* *is a devoted, die-hard J/Y fan for life*



Author's Response: XD idk maybe he will end up with someone completely different or maybe not. i didnt put that on purpose just so u know. that was a n accident I DIDNT MEAN IT :)

Summary: Jeremie and Aelita grow farther apart each day. The entire group is going through hard times, especially since they were blamed for murder since William's sudden disappearance. Jeremie gets strange love notes from a mysterious girl who signs as "Zanna." Season 3 spoilers.

Categories: Ships, Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Odd and Aelita, Ships > Other Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: No Word count: 1958 Read Count: 10093
Published: Nov 19, 2006 Updated: Dec 22, 2006
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Feb 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Afraid

Slick and suspenseful. This is very good work; 7/10. Hmm...do I sense J/Y forming? 

Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Feb 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Afraid

Slick and suspenseful. This is very good work; 7/10. Hmm...do I sense J/Y forming? 

Author's Response:

=^.^= very good prediction. Maybe you do, maybe you don't I'm not telling!! I haven't been able to update any of my stories lately, so for you unpatient people, deal with it.

sorry if thats rude, but I mean it!!

~~ =^.^= zukogirl6 

Summary: A new girl, Brittney, joins Kadic, and Odd decides to introduce her to Lyoko.
Categories: Ships > Other, Ships, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No Word count: 298 Read Count: 5923
Published: Dec 31, 2006 Updated: Dec 31, 2006
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed half-star
Date: May 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I hate to say it, but I just wasn't into this. First of all, the girl-who-finds-Lyoko-and-hooks-up-with-Odd plot has been so overworked that readers tend to overlook it. Secondly, your name is probably Brittney (self-inserts; also overlooked). It's unrealistic because the group would never accept a new member out of the blue. Also, FYI, multiple quotes do not belong in the same paragraph.

Sorry, but I can't give this more than half a star. You just have to be more original next time, okay? :)

Summary: Valentines day is a wonderful time, for some people. For others all it does is cause them pain. This is for those people
Categories: Ships, Ships > Ulrich and Sissi Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Hidden Pain
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 411 Read Count: 1191
Published: Feb 14, 2007 Updated: Feb 14, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shadow of the Heart

Let me guess...Odd's point of view?

Weird poem... o_0

Summary:

Aelita is known for her kind words and gracious attitude. People natrally come to her for help with their problems, and not just the Lyoko gang.

***Soulbound Substory


Categories: Ships Characters: Aelita Hopper
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 833 Read Count: 1199
Published: Feb 14, 2007 Updated: Feb 14, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Feb 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Spirit Healer

Very nice piece of work! Aelita's kindness really shines in this, as does your writing style. :) Happy post-Saint Valentine's Day.



Author's Response: Thank you.

Summary: Alright, the weridest and the wrongest couple that will never show up. (hopefuly)

Categories: Seasons, Seasons > Pre-Season 1, Ships > Other Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Difficult Challenge?!
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 245 Read Count: 1293
Published: Mar 09, 2007 Updated: Mar 09, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Apr 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: First it's here, Then it isn't.

Short but sweet! S/J forever! Extremely cute. (Thanks for responding to my challenge, btw.) ^_^ I think I might look forward to more S/J from you? Good writing style! 8/10!!

Summary:

Aelita has always been somewhat of a mysterious character, and now her mother has been materialized from her prison on Lyoko! This is not a oneshot.

I have a lot of explaining done, like what Lyoko and XANA are, because some of my friends might read this. So, you can skip those parts.

Anyway, please review!


Categories: Seasons > Post-Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No Word count: 2264 Read Count: 5241
Published: May 16, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2007
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed
Date: May 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Amerald

Read and rest! LOL!! Good story so far. I like this. (Btw, how long have you been writing fanfiction anyway???)

Author's Response: um, about a month, by now. When you first asked it was like half a month.